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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 1, 2008    Reads: 212    Comments: 11    Likes: 0   


I forced a smile onto my face even though it creeped me out a little bit.

"What? You don't want to be my girlfriend?" he asked in an irritated tone as he pulled away from me. I guess he could tell I had forced the smile. He stood 5 feet away from me, glaring at me intently.

"I never said that Adam," I said quietly as I took a step towards him. I don't know why, but I had the feeling that him being in a bad mood was not a good thing. Something told me that I had to calm him down, or get out of there.

"But you were thinking it!" he said angrily as he crossed his arms over his chest.

"No I wasn't Adam!" I said in an irritated tone.

He grabbbed my right wrist tightly and pulled me closer to him. I whimpered in pain, and tried to pull away from him but he wouldn't let me. "I told you not to lie to me Taylor!" he said harshly.

"Adam! Please stop, your hurting me!" I whispered, as I looked into his eyes pleadingly. He stared at me angrily for a couple seconds, and then let my wrist go. I fell to the ground, holding my wrist trying to stop the pain.

Adam kneeled down beside me. "Tay, I'm sorry," he said quietly. He put his hand gently under my chin to tilt my head up but I pulled my head away.

"I wanna go home!" I stated as I tried to hold back my tears. My hands were trembling, and my breath was shaky. Was I actually scared of Adam?

"Please stay...just for a little bit longer! I promise I won't hurt you anymore," he said in a quiet tone. "Please..."

I debated on wether or not I should stay for a few minutes and then finally I nodded my head yes. I wasn't sure if it was the right choice but part of me was afraid to say no.


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Comments:

danielle
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luv it first comment wooo

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

I know this is going to get more intense. Good work at building the suspence. Hope you had a good trip.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Hurry hurry hurry.. Gee if i go to the edge of my seat anymore I'll fall off..
Amazing storyline Tori.. Loved it

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Don't fall off your chair 0_0

I realy enjoyed it ; Update soon...

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

God!..
i LOV the way u built it up so we saw this comin... nd didn't at the same time... er.. if u get wot i mean.. xlolx..

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

will do

i dont like adam much anymore
cant read to read more
if i was her i wouls have left........i hope

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

lol sorry.. I already fell.. Nothing to do with you.. Just, me being clumsy.. But I still love this

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Um ok thanks?

you're girls are really dumb you kknow that? *chuckles*

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

the-n's story reader
(not registered user)

omg i would have said F*ck no

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

i liked it

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

rawr. he needs to be smacked.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Go for it! :D



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