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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24

Submitted: Jul 7, 2008    Reads: 206    Comments: 11    Likes: 3   


Rest In Peace Ceasar

That is Ceasar...he died on 7/06/08 from getting hit by a car...rest in peace

Anyways...here's the next Chapter.

I instantly felt tired, and relaxed. "Come on princess," he said quietly as he picked me up again. Although, my head didn't hurt anymore I wished I hadn't taken the pills. Now I was too weak to fight back if he tried anything.

He carried me out to the living room and set me down on the couch. "Are you hungry yet princess?" he asked as he leaned down over me, as if calling me princess was going to make me forget everything that had just happened.

"Adam, I really just want you to take me home now," I whispered out of fear.

"Please stay Taylor," he begged as he leaned a little closer into my face.

"No Adam! I want to go home! Now!" I said as strongly and as loudly as I could. He immediatly slapped me across my face. I yelped in pain, and held my cheek softly with my hand. I wanted to slap him right back but I knew since I was feeling so weak at that moment it wouldn't be a good idea.

"Never speak to me in that tone again! Do you understand me?" he yelled. I stayed silent for a few seconds. Then he grabbed my hair and forced me closer to him. "Answer me!"

"Yes! I understand," I said in a weak tone. He kissed me roughly.

"Now, are you hungry yet?" he asked in a calm tone as if nothing had happened.

I did my best not to cry as I nodded my head yes. I knew that he would probably let me go home after we ate dinner.

"Mmkay sweetheart I'll order a pizza. What kind do you like?" he asked as he stood up straight.

I shrugged my shoulders and stared at the ground. I was truly terrorified.

"Stop pouting Taylor," he said in a tone that sent chills down my spine. "What kind to you want?"

"Cheese I guess," I whispered quietly.

"OK sweetheart," he said with a smile on his face. "Stay here while I go order the pizza."


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Comments:

Oh crap...uh...there was supposed to be a picture of my dog at the top...but I guess it didn't show up...oops

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

ugh ugh i hate him he is so so so just ugh

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Maaaan! Is she going to kick him in the balls already or what? Grrr :P
I loooove the story Tori (whoohoo.. that rhymed :D XD) Update sooon :)
Much love =)

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Don't worry...in time she will.

danny4ever
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wat a creep ugh she nees to do like wat xxxsrushtixxx said lol

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

wrrriiiittteee moooorrrreee

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

I hate him i hate him i hate him. ilove this novel update soon plez

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

WHERE is my knife i dont ever want to use it but right now i would very much like to go INTO the computer kill him and make him lose a few presiuse things!!!!!!!! sry that was kinda psycho sounding wasnt it??? n e way i just dont like ppl like that NO ONE should het hit unless they want to get hit right back!!!!!!

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

No...no no no...it doesn't sound...psycho...
*Runs to bedroom and hides under bed*

Sorry about your doggie:(

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

i thought he was to be her wa out and now he is just a pain.....

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sowy

aaw.. dats sooo sad bout ur doggie tori...

nehoo.. ooh.. chapter sends chills down mii spines..
i LOVE it!!..
xoxox

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol thanx

Wooow. Is he bipolar?

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya



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