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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 8, 2008    Reads: 222    Comments: 18    Likes: 2   


He walked over to the phone and started dialing the number. I stood up and made a run for the door. Even though I was very weak I knew I had to try. I pulled open the door and ran outside. Adam caught up to me and put one of his hands over my mouth, while he used the other to hold me still. "Calm down princess!" he whispered into my ear as I struggled to get free.

I stayed still and after he was sure I was calm he turned me around to face him. I instantly kneed him in his balls and took off running towards my house. It was so hard to keep running, but I forced myself to. After a while I could hear him catching up to me. I urged myself to run faster. I was almost to my house when I stopped cold. There was a police car in my driveway. I was so exhausted that I fell down onto the sidewalk. Adam was by my side instantly. "What the fuck do you think your doing?" he yelled angrily as he forced me to my feet.

He was about to make me turn around and go back with him, but then I whispered his name. He stopped and glared at me for a second. "Adam, there's a cop at my house." I whispered fearfully as I stared at the cop car. He turned towards the cop car and took in a deep breath.

"We'll talk about what you just did later," he said as he picked me up bridal style and started to carry me towards my house.

He carried me inside, and set me down on my feet. Two officers were sitting on the couch next to Jeff. Jeff looked like he was about to cry. Jeff stood up when he saw me and pulled me into a hug. "I'm so sorry Taylor." he whispered into my ear.

"Why? What's wrong?" I asked. I was starting to get nervous.

"It's your mom...she was on her way home from work and she got into a car accident. She...she didn't make it," he said as he pulled away from me and a few tears streamed down his face.


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Comments:

omg omg omg omg ....that is all i can say ....if i were her i would never leave her house

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Oh crap.. I feel horrible for her.. Oh man.. Why is this happening to her.. Poor her.. poor poor Taylor =(

P.S.: Thank you for having made her knee his balls.. =D

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

oh no. God i don't know what to say. Poor Taylor ='(

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

WHAT?!?! noooo. realy good storie. plz updt sn

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

NOOO she cant be left alone with Jeff he will kill her once he gets the chance. i love it update soon plez

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Will Do

omg thats soo sad. Adams a jerk. Write more and longer mroew plzzzzz

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Uh-huh

the-n's story reader
(not registered user)

please...i have a feeling jeff had something to do with it Fuck you Jeff and Adam

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol calm down

ummm yeah i feel the same way where is her dad...hmmmm
i wonder if he crashed into her...hmmm just thoughtsss

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

her real dad is dead
and i'm not going to tell you if her step dad had anything to do with her mom's death...you'll find out in time

Wow....

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Um...thanks

Frig

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Crap....omg......WRITE MORE! Hopefully Jeff will be nicer....and screw Adam!!!!!!!!! Omg.,....Adam needs to die!

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

please update!!!

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

woah, your a really good writer, please update soon! it's almost addictive ;P

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much

lizette
(not registered user)

wow ur story is amazing

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

FUGDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

*lets out a long stream of profanity in several different languages including ten dialects of giberish*

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

OOOOOOMMMMMMGGGGGG whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy????
Oh, that is so sad.
Oh, I could cry...

Anyways..Adam is still a creep. and finally she kneed him in the balls! yay!

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha is that all you care about

NOOOOOOO!!!!! You've had me hanging on the edge of my seat simnce 10:30 this morning!!! Excellent work and keep me posted!!1

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thank you and will do



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