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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 11, 2008    Reads: 211    Comments: 19    Likes: 3   


I pushed past everyone and ran to my bedroom. I closed my bedroom door, wanting so bad to lock it. This door only locked from the outside...'for your own protection' as Jeff would say. I sat with my back against the door crying so hard that it was diffiult for me to breathe. I had lost her. I had lost them both. My mom and my dad were both dead. I was alone on this earth. I had nobody to help me fight back against Jeff. I had nobody to help me get away from Adam, who I knew would never let me go. I heard a slight knocking on the door and then Adam's voice asking me to let him in. "Go away!" I screamed through my tears.

"Taylor please! Just let me in," Adam said in a worried tone.

"Go away!" I screamed again. "I just want to be alone..." I whispered the last part but he still managed to hear me.

"I'm not letting you be alone sweetie. Now come on, open up. I don't want to hurt you by forcing my way in," he said as he started to turn the knob to open the door.

"Go away," I whispered desperately. I didn't want to see him now. I should have been here when my mom died, and not at my so-called boyfriend's house! He started to push gently, but forcefully against the door causing me to slide forward. "Please Adam...just leave me alone." He silently closed my bedroom door again and then picked me up bridal style. He cradled me in his arms as I cried into his chest. I forgot about everything he had done to me that day and seeked his comfort.

After I had stopped crying a little bit he said, "Your step dad said that he wants you to come to my house tomorrow morning when he goes to the hospital..."

He was about to say more, but I cut him off by asking, "Why does he have to go to the hospital?"

"Your mother is on life support. Jeff has to go in and sign the papers for them to pull the plug..." he said in an uneasy tone.

"Wait...my mom's alive?" I asked as I looked up at him with hopeful eyes.

"Technically yes, but the doctors think that there is too much damage to her brain for her to ever recover. She will be a vegitable for the rest of her life," Adam explained.

I scrambled off of his lap and ran out of my bedroom to the living room, where Jeff was still talking to the police officers. "She's alive!" I yelled.

"Honey, calm down. You know that your mother never wanted to live like that," Jeff said as he stood up and tried to give me a hug.

"Miracles can happen! Please don't kill her! Please!" I begged as I started to cry again.


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Comments:

Oh plez dont let him kill her i dont what Tyler to be alone (if i spelt her name wrong i'm sorry) i love it update soon plez:]

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

plz *sad face* but knowing jeff its not going to happen

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

if he kills her i am going to b royally PISSED!!!!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

omg she is alive ...she cant die then taylor will be all alone..boo hoo
update soon its really good

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

write mooorrreeee

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Oh wow. That story is amazing so far... up date soon. =]

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

omg! im anxious! please update soon!!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Don't let her die!!!!!!!! Let Taylor find a way to get away from Jeff and Adam!!!!!!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL WE SHALL SEE :D

Don't let Jeff kill her Toriiii! Pwease pwetty pwease with a cheery on top? =(
She'll be all alone at the mercy of two crazy jerks, Jeff and Adam! *bawls* *cries* *sniffs* *makes face* =(
Update sooon.. I can't wait to read more!

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

I just want to point out that I already have a shorter version of this novel written out in notebook so all of this has already been decided so pleading won't help save her if I already wrote down that she dies but it will get you a hug...but i'm not saying that she is going to die either i'm just saying that if...ya you get what i mean

OMG!!!

write more..........im not gonna suggest killing jeff........i know u must have decided something for him already!

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

*sigh* hmmmmm is there neva gonna be happiness fo her..stupid jeff and adam asssss

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

That sucks now her mom might be gone hope she doesn't die.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

What? Don't let Jeff kill Taylor's mother (I know, everyone's saying it too).

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Omg, I Love Et.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

OMFG!!! DON'T LET JEFF KILL HER MOM!!!! it's not nice to lose a mom. pleaz update soon

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I'll update as soon as i can

Jeez okay! Well then.. *hugs back* =)
Let's just hope for the best eh?

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

wait a little longer!!! dont let her die!!!
~Lemon

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

YAY! *stops with the profanity*

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

OH, I hope she lives...it would be so sad if she didn't

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Of course she'll live



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