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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 184    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


I woke up to Jeff lightly shaking me. "Come on Taylor, it's time for you to wake up." he said gently. I opened my eyes, even though I felt like I hadn't slept in a week. "Get up, and get dressed. I'll drop you off at Adam's on my way to the hospital."

the memories of the past night came flooding back to me. "Jeff please don't make me go to Adam's. I'll stay here if you dont' want me to go to the hospital but please don't make me go to Adam's," I begged as I got out of the bed and stood in front of him.

"I'm not leaving you alone Taylor. You're going to Adam's now get dressed," Jeff commanded as he moved past me.

"But Jeff.." I started to say but he cut me off.

"Don't agrue with me Taylor, just do as your told!" he yelled as he slammed my bedroom door.

I slowly walked over to my dresser and picked out my outfit. I decided on wearing black skin tight pants that had a picture of a pink fairy running up one of the legs, a black ruffled mini skirt, and a tight black t-shirt that had the same pink fairy on it. After getting dressed I put on a thin layer of eye liner and some cover up, so the red mark from Adam wasn't as visible. I put a black arm band over each wrist so the bruises from where Adam had grabbed me weren't at all visible.

I walked out of my bedroom and then out to Jeff's car where he was waiting for me. He drove me silently to Adam's house, and then sped away quickly as soon as I got out of the car and closed the door.

Hesitantly I walked up to the front door and rang the door bell.

*I HAVE A NEW NOVEL UP TITLED I Should Have Told*


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Comments:

Again sorry for the shortness...I thought it would be longer when I posted it

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

it's ok hunnii!..

i 4giv yooh!..

but... post more soon!!!!!..

xlolx..

{[yay!.. first comment!!.. whooopee!]}...

*we r disregardin ur short comment .. k?!*..

xox

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! I have been forgived!

Oh No! Please Update soon!

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

I love it update soon plez

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

i wouldn't have went in, i would've walked back to the house, grabed as much money as i could, then booked! LOVE YOU T-KITTEN!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha booked? Nice word usage

Short but hey thats ok. still good. lol. sounds like a cool outfit. lol.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha



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