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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 17, 2008    Reads: 386    Comments: 11    Likes: 2   


A tall man answered the door. He was wearing a business suit and looked like he was in a hurry. "May I help you miss?" he asked as he stared at me.

I opened my mouth to talk but then Adam ran down the stairs and came to the door. "Hey Taylor," he said with a smile on his face. I forced a smile onto my face, trying to hide my fear and sadness.

"Hey," I said quietly, unable to look at him.

"Nice to meet you Taylor," this tall man said as he grabbed his breif case and walked past me out the door. I watched him walk out to his car, leaving me alone with Adam.

I felt Adam take my hand gently and pull me into his house. "Who was that?" I managed to ask.

"That was my dad...did you eat breakfast yet?" Adam asked.

"I'm not hungry," I replied quietly.

"Come on you have to eat some time Taylor," he said in a concerned tone.

"I'll eat, I'm just not hungry right now," I replied.

He pulled me into a hug and I instantly tensed up. "I know your sad about your mom, but you really need to eat," he whispered.

I pulled away from his hug and glared at him. "Why do you even care? You hit me Adam!" I yelled.

His face changed from concerned to angry. "I care a lot about you Taylor! Never question my love for you!" he yelled back.

Did he just say that he loved me?...It doesn't matter I have to show him that he can't hurt people like this! "You're not supposed to hurt peope you love Adam!" I said angrily.

"I'm sorry Taylor," he said as he took a step towards me.

"You can't just expect me to forget this," I said as I took a step backwards.

"No, I don't expect you to forget it. I hope that you will forgive me," he said as he reached out and took my hand gently. I knew I should pull my hand away but I didn't. "I love you Taylor..."

"I...I love you too," I said as I looked at him.


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Comments:

ugh i am starting to hate adam
keep it up it is great
cant wait to read more

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

oh my I need more.... post more soon. =]

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

i hate adam just like i hated him on the-n he needs to go jump off a cliff somewhere

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol

i hate adam just like i hated him on the-n he needs to go jump off a cliff somewhere

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

lol

Hummmmm......this is getting even more interesting! Please update soon!

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol will do

is he unhinged or somfin?!..
xlolx..

update soon torii!!..

xox

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol yes sweetie Adam is a little bit...out there

ughhh is he crazzzzyyyy or just on smething ......

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol

That Adam is a creep.........and scray too!

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

write moree plz

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

fluzz.... why dosen't she follow her instincts?

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Cause she is stupid?

Oh that little jerk. uhh he is so annoying. seriously he has anger issues. lol.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha wow



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