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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 19, 2008    Reads: 131    Comments: 8    Likes: 1   


He smiled and pulled me into a gentle yet passionate kiss. "Now, how do bagels sound for breakfast?" he asked as he pulled away slightly.

"I'm really not hunry," I said as I rested my head against his chest. I knew taht I shouldn't have given him a second chance, but I figured that spedning time with him was better than being home alone with Jeff. Besides, he said he loved me. He wouldn't hurt me again. I felt safer with him now, that I knew he loved me. Nobody purposely hurts some one they love.

He laughed a little bit and said, "Fine, I guess I'll just have to take you out for breakfast and you can decide what you want when you get there."

I giggled and whispered, "Your too stubborn."

He picked me up bridal style with a smile on his face and said, "Yep, now come on we might lost our reservations if we're late!"

"Oh, so you planned this?" I asked as he carried me out his front door.

He laughed again. "Surprise princess," he said as he set me down in the passenger seat of the car.

"I could have walked you know," I said with a sly smile on my face.

He chuckled and said, "Yes princess, I know." He leaned down and kissed me softly on the lips. I smiled as he closed the car door for me.

About half an hour later we were walking into a local restraunt.

As a waitress was taking us to our seats we passed by Justin and a group of his friends. I could feel his eyes on me as we walked pass. All I could do was move closer to Adam for protection.


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Comments:

yay first post
this is really good ...but i wish she would run away from adam instead of givin him another chance ugh...oh well it is really good cant wait to read more

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

well i'm second post that's way better i think jk lol luv ur story

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

i love it!!! i hope she dumps him though. update soon plez

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeps

i dunno!
I'm confused about Adam......first he beats the crap out of her and then he says he LOVES her and acts so sweet n caring!!

it's as if he has got a multiple personality disorder!

~Kritika

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

write moreeee

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

csmead426
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Wow, no violence!lol! I like it even though it was short! Please update soon!!

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

YAY! you didn't make him hurt her! ty T-Kitten!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha yw

Ok, liking Adam a little more...

He is stubborn...wooow. lol.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

haha



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