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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 20, 2008    Reads: 374    Comments: 13    Likes: 2   


As I sat down at our table Adam said, "I'll be right back sweet heart I have to se the men's room."

I nodded quietly, hoping that nothing would happen with Justin while he was gone.

"It'll be fine sweetheart," Adam said quietly as if reading my thoughts.

I nodded quietly again. Adam turned and walked to the men's room. I picked up the menu and tried to think of something that wouldn't be hard for me to eat, and would please Adam. About a minute later I saw a shadow fall apon the table. I looked up to see Justin standing there, and I tried my best not to look scared. "What do you want Justin?" I asked in a shaky voice.

"May I sit down?" he asked in a polite tone.

I was too afraid to say no, so instead I nodded my head yes.

"Thank you," he said as he sat down across from me.

"What do you want?" I asked again. He was less intimidating now that he was eye level with me.

"I just wanted to tell you that..." he started to say but he was cut off by Adam.

"What the fuck do you think your doing?" Adam yelled as he grabbed the back of Justin's shirt and pulled him out of the booth. I closed my eyes tightly with fear as I saw the anger in Adam's eyes.

Adam dragged Justin out of the restraunt, and started to yell at him. I couldn't hear what he was saying, and I didn't really care. I was too busy thinking about what I was going to do if Adam was still mad when he came back inside.

He promised me that he wouldn't hurt me any more. I believed him, but deep down I knew that there was always a chance.

After about 5 minutes Adam walked back inside. He came over and sat down across from me. "Are you OK?" he asked in a concerned tone.

I nodded my head quietly.

"What's wrong?" he asked.

"I was just scared, but I'm OK now. Promise..." I said as I forced another smile onto my face.

"If your sure princess," he said with uncertainty in his voice.

"I am," I said as I reached across the table and put my hand on top of his.


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Comments:

OMG i think this is so awesome

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

yay first post .....i cant wait to read more but i am going on holidays for 2 weeks so that kind of pisses me off but i will just have to read your stuff when i get back

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

I think he was trying to warn her.

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Hey, this just got featured on the random first lines at around 6:30 EDT (my time), but this is getting pretty awesome here.

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

OMFG i hate him sooooooo much. i love it update soon plez

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

omg wow. i think he was trying to say he was sry. love it udate sooon soon plz.

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

You may be right

Hmmm... I wonder what Justin wasw going to say to her. I love it! Please update soon!!

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

omgosh!!..
i bet nefink.. justin was either goin 2 warn her or apologise!!..
[am i ryt?.. ami ryt??.. of cors im ryt!!!..]
=D

ooh.. love it by the way!!!.
update soooon!!!

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

You MIGHT be right

i dunno if she shud trust adam!

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

i guess he aint crazy ..lol wellll maybe alittle

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

I like it but dont trust Adam. Plz update

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

ehhhhh *feels like her At the moment*

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Sowy

daaaaaaaang...he is protective. lol. Hm, it would be cool if Justin was suddenly nice, and then helped her with Adam and Jeff, and wa la. lol.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes it would be cool



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