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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 21, 2008    Reads: 199    Comments: 10    Likes: 2   


When we got back to Adam's place Jeff was waiting for me. "What is he doing here?" I heard Adam ask himself as we got out of the car.

"Come on Taylor it's time to go home," Jeff said through the opened car window.

I nodded my head and obediantly got in the passenger seat. As we were leaving I saw Adam give Jeff a weird look.

When we got back home Jeff told me to sit down on the couch. Again I did as I was told.

"Next week I'm sending you to a boarding school in London, England. untill then I don't wnat you hanging out with Adam. Do you understand?" he asked in a stern tone. All I could do was stare wide eyed at him.

'Are you serious?" I managed to ask. I had always wanted to go to London, but at that moment I didn't. I wanted to stay where my parent's bodies were, even if it meant living with Jeff.

"I"m very serious! Now go to your room. I have a head ache," he said as he sat down next to me on the couch and turned on another figure skating show.

Slowly I walked to my bedroom and closed the door.

For 3 days it was like this. I would stay in my bedroom and listen to my music untill Jeff needed something and then I would come out and obediantly do what he asked. Adam kept calling, but Jeff wouldn't let me answer the phone. Once he even stopped by the house while I was in my room. I heard Jeff and Adam arguing, but then Adam left.

Then one day Jeff called my out of my bedroom, and there was a girl sitting next to him on the couch. She looked about my age, and she was a major prep.

"Um...yea?" I asked as I took a step closer.

"Taylor this is Amber. I think you should go to the mall with her for a few hours," he explained. The look on his face told me that this wasn't an option.

"Sure," I said as I walked towards the front door and put my shoes on.

"Here's some money. Have fun," Jeff said as he handed me $50. I had no idea where he had gotten this money from since he didn't have a job, but I was too glad to be getting out of the house to care.

"Wait, your wearing that?" Amber asked in a disgusted tone as she stared at my outfit.

"Yep," I said as I walked out the front door. I got into the passenger seat of her car and waited for her to come out.


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Comments:

OHH something is going to happen :O i love it update soon plez

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

update soon

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

i luved this story on the-n until they had all those rules but keep posting tori

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

:)

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol

lizette
(not registered user)

i love your story!!!!!!!
its awesome

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

noo dont go somethings gonna happen. UPDATE

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

oh no. somethins gonna happen.....
~Lemon

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Maybe :)

Welltori.......plzzzzzzzz update soon!!!

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

oh boy... i can just see the arguments and remarks about to ensue *rubs hands together, exited*

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha oh my god

hm, wierd. I say go back to Adam...and scrooe the school. lol.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha



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