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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 27, 2008    Reads: 186    Comments: 18    Likes: 2   


The ride to the mall was silent, except for Amber's music. It took all my energy not to jump out of the car.

Once we got inside the building I was immediatly grabbed by Adam's friend, Matt. He was hugging me so hard I could barely breath. "Where the hell have you been? Adam is going crazy trying to find you!" he whispered harshly into my ear.

"I'm sorrry, Jeff wouldn't let me out of the house!" I managed to say. He was still squeezing me tightly.

"Well come on, I have to get you to him before he hurts some one!" Matt said as he grabbed my wrist lightly and started to pull me towards the exit.

"Matt I can't! If Jeff found out he'd kill me!" I said as I tried to pull my wrist back.

"Fine, I'll call his cell and have him come here." Matt said with uncertainty in his voice. He let go of my wrist and took out his cell phone.

"OK, well Amber and I are gonna go shop because if I come home empty handed Jeff will know something is up," I said as I started to walk back towards Amber.

"Wait," he said quickly. "Mike and Aaron will come with you so it will be easier to find you when Adam gets here."

Two of Matt's friends walked closer to us. One of them said, "Don't worry matt we'll take care of them." He winked at Amber and she giggled a little bit.

'Great, now I have to deal with miss priss and two gaurds...fabulous!' I thought to myself.

"I'll call you when Adam gets here," Matt said and then started dialing Adam's number.

As we were walking awayu I heard Matt talking to Adam and then I heard him running up to us.

"He wants to talk to you," he said as he handed me the phone.

"Hey," I said as I put the phone to my ear.

"I want you to come to my house with Matt," adam said sternly.

"Adam, I can't Jeff would be furious!" I tried to explain but he didn't care.

"I don't give a shit about Jeff! Just get your ass to my house," Adam yelled.

"Bye Adam," I said angrily and then hung up on him. I handed the phone back to Matt and then started to walk away like it was nothing. Matt was looking at me as if I was crazy. Amber was too busy flirting with Mike and Aaron for any of them to notice.


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Comments:

u tell him he has no control over her mmhmm

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

Run away from both of the MFers!

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

i love it i hope she takes this opertunity to run away from every thing now update soon plez

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure will

pleaz update soon, im in love with this storie, though i wish u would have longer chapters

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry

Uh Oh! I like! Please update soon!!

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

i really like this story a lot.
i hate jeff cuz he is so ewww, and adam has this problems but i still have hope for her that adam wont be mean to her:0
tillz

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks for reading

bookworm
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OOOOOOH MYYYYYY GOOOOSSSSHHHHH!!!!! i HATE adam!! her stepdad i USED to hate, but he's ok right now...if her hurts her again, i will HATE him for eternity (along with adam)!!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

*ish scardeded* update soon plez t-kitten! i miss you! *hugs. tickle tourtures for not talking to me*

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Sowy

a the-n reader
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I can just tell what's going to happen Tori lol. Adam will probably kill Jeff and abuse her over and over and she won't be able to go to England. But hey, hopefully I'm wrong....in a good way ha ha. X]

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

Oh, dang, last chapter. post more and i'll post more of mine lol.

HURRY I HATE SUSPENSE....well i like making others deal with it...hehe(evil laugh) lol

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha i'll hurry if you hurry


OMGOSH Adam is soooooo demented. Hes really pissing me off. Update soon since I have a bad feeling something bad is going to happen.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

I'll post as soon as I can

POST ALREADY

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

POST ALREADY

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

I will as soon as I can

blackflame28
(not registered user)

I'm really confused by something. Why is Taylor so weak against Adam? She doesn't know him, so where is this "love" or "attachment" coming from? He was rarely nice to her before the abuse started.

A couple of suggestions, longers chapters are nice. Also always check your grammar and spelling.

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

K thanx

Keep me updated!

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

write morre!!!

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I will as soon as I can

it's otay i forgiveige you t-kitten!

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

that was really good i just got back from holidas so ya it was good cant wait to read more

Posted: Aug 5, 2008



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