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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 5, 2008    Reads: 294    Comments: 9    Likes: 1   


"Did you just hang up on him?" Matt said as he stepped in front of me.

"Um...ya," I said sa I tried to step around him.

"What the fuck is the matter with you? Do you want him to flip on you?" he asked as he grabbed my shoulders and forced me to stay standing in front of him.

"What is he gonna do? Hit me in the middle of all these people? I don't think so," I said as I tried again to move around him.

"Ya, but when I get your ass to his house he won't have people to worry about!" he said as he grabbed my wrist again. This time his grip was tight and I knew I wouldn't be able to get away. Matt's phone started to ring again.

"Hello?" he said as he put the phone to his ear.

I could hear Adam yelling at Matt.

"Ya, I'll get her there," Matt said as he stared angrily at me.

There was a few minutes of Adam talking to Matt and then Matt hung up.

"He wants me to tell you that if you don't come with me now, he'll come here to get you and he won't be as forgiving then."Matt said as he started to pull me towards the exit.

"Matt! I'm not going with you," I said as I tried to pull away from his grasp.

"Don't create a scene Taylor," Matt said in a tone that made me obey him out of fear. I had no idea why I was walking with him to his truck, but for some reason I was afraid not to go with him.

The ride to Adam's house was silent.

When we turned into Adam's driveway I realized how scared I was. He had promised me that he wouldn't hurt me anymore, but something told me that his promise was about to be broken.


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Comments:

OMG! OMG! OMG! (That stands for Oh My Goshy, btw) I can't wait for the next chapter.

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

OMG! Nice and suspenseful, ofcourse. I truely wonder if you want to kill your readers! XD! Anywho please update soon! :D

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha why is everybody saying that? If I killed my readers I would have no fan base and then when i get published nobody would buy my books...killing my readers would be a bad thing

UPDATE!!!!!!! maybe =]

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha soon


OMG! OMG! Wow. For a second there I got a little scared but it left when I finished reading lol. Like the suspense but it is a bit brutal, likely to kill if your not careful. Update when you can :)

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha some how I doubt the suspense from my novels can kill some one but i will update as soon as possible

i love it update soon plez

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

OMG OMG WRITE MORREEEEE

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

love it update soon! =)

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

AHH YAY MORE!!! gotta go read...

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

omg !

Posted: Aug 8, 2008



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