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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 6, 2008    Reads: 298    Comments: 11    Likes: 1   


I saw Adam open the front door, and out of fear I pressed my back further in the seat of the car.

Matt looked over at me and said, "You brought this on yourself. If you had just listened to me in the first place this wouldn't be happening right now."

Deep down I knew he was right, but I couldn't bring myself to admit it. "This shouldn't be happening at all," I mumbled as I opened the door and got out.

Once I forced myself inside the house I stayed quiet as Adam closed the front door. "Sit down," he grumbled as he walked past me into the kitchen.

Obediantly, I sat down on the couch. My hands were shaking and my breath was unsteady.

"Do you need anything from your house before we leave?" I heard him ask from the kitchen.

"What?" I asked as I turned a little to see him.

"Do you want anything from your house before you leave?" he repeated.

"Where are we going?" I said, answering his question with another question.

"Vegas," he said simply like it was no big deal.

"Why?" I replied now a little interested.

"Because we're going to elope!" he said again as if it was an every day thing.

*Sorry so short I have 45 minutes to post another chapter to I Should Have Told and to post my new story up*


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Comments:

yay first post
ya it was short but who cares it was good ..and u always make it up to us later lol
cant wait to read more

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

elope...what? I feel stupid...what does that mean? Hold on! I'm going to dictionary.com and shall be back with another comment!

Gotta love online dictionarys!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! ok, so, does that mean they are simply running off or running off and getting married?

Dictionarys are so complicated. gosh.

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

running off to get married

oh poor girl (Is he goin to force her into marrige[sp?]??) Well please update soon! Please do not end it anytime soon!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry it is coming to an end in a few more chapters...like...1 or 2

omg!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008


*le gasp* Poor thing. Now shes going to be tied down with him and his abuse. I hope her luck changes even if it is a little.

The shortness is okay. Its not how long it is but how good it is. If you ask me it was really good for its length. Cant wait til the next update :)

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe thank you

*le gasp* shizz.... i KNEW it...

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

ohh oooo i think he needs help...lol well we just gotta see thanks for writing

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

*gasp* i love it update soon plez

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do :)

why !
(shocked) :)
Adam is crazy.

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

okay i just think Adam is a retarded butt wipe. poor Taylor who has to go through soo much poop

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha i love your analagy's



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