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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 10, 2008    Reads: 318    Comments: 21    Likes: 1   


"What?!" I practically screamed as I stood up off the couch, still facing him.

He looked up from what he was doing and glared at me. "This is not the time to piss me off Taylor," he said sternly.

I should have taken that as a warning to sit back down, but I wasn't about to marry him. "What if I don't want to marry you Adam?" I asked in a tone that told him I didn't want to.

He instantly took out a knife and started to walk towards me. I screamed and took off towards the front door, but he cought me before I could get there. He put the knife to my throat and held it there for a while as I started to cry out of fear. "I killed 2 people to get this far with you Taylor. I'm not backing out now! I killed your fucking father so Jeff could get with your mother! I killed your mother so I could get with you! You will marry me Taylor," he whispered sternly into my ear. "Do you understand?"

As I nodded my head out of fear and saddness, I realized that my life had officially ended. From that moment on I would be under his control. I wouldn't be able to run home if I needed to. I would never be safe. He had killed my mother, and my father. He took away my family. He took away my life. I hated him for that.

THE END

P.S Sorry the ending was so short.


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Comments:

Wait..the end? thats it...no no no no no no nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! gosh darnet.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

*sigh* sad ending

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Sowy

*sobbing* that was the end *sniffle* i love it though:]

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks


OMGOSH! *through tears and sobbing* that was so sad. Taylor is so screwed til death *wipes face* Had fun reading this story. :) *stray tear*

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading

Damn, MFer could just kill me to stop me from being with him!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

awww *cries*

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Sowy

i like the ending because i waz wondering were u gonna make it az long az u did it on the-n but i still love it

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx

I loved it! Are you going to write an epilogue? Though I feel sorry for her, I'm glad it wasn't just another happy ending.

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I might write a sequal

aww that is really sad:(
but in not happy, its done:(
so write some more story's please:)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

What a sucky ending! I mean, I loved the story, but that's a depressing ending!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm a depressing writer, what can I say haha

Wait HE killed her father?? and then her mother??? HOW
o dear please write a sequel =)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha I might

oh please do(write a sequal)!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

such a sad story

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Person
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Your writing is very predictable. That was a terrible ending.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry for being predictable

:'( So sad!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Sowy

wow quick ending but i enjoyed it

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

that was a pretty suckish ending(no offense) I honestly dont see the point for a sequal to this unless she manages to escape from him but there is pretty much no life for her sooo... =D

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha no the sequal is going to be better... i hope

Please, sequel! Please

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha soon

I loved the whole series. It was very interesting and actually at some points I didn't even think it was going to happen. The part where I found out Adam killed Taylor's mother and father was such a twist to the story! Great ending!

Posted: Oct 3, 2008

awwwww c'mon at least tell it to where she goes to Vegas!!!!!! Im gonna cry. MAN U ARE AN AWESOME WRITER!!!!!

Posted: Oct 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha in the sequal.

Thank you :)

miranda
(not registered user)

oh my goodness! why! such a sad ending. but... i still LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED it anyway. i mean how could i not. i think you rock! so of course i'll share my feelings and what you want to hear mixed together.

Posted: Nov 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, i want to hear what you honestly think.



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