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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 13, 2008    Reads: 264    Comments: 15    Likes: 3   


When I got home I silently went to my room and started to read a book. My mom was at work, and I knew that when she was gone I should stay in my room.

When my mom finally did get home from work she came to my room to see what I had bought from the mall. She closed the door and sat on my bed. I modeled the shirt for her and then showed her the CDs.

After I was done I sat down next to her on my bed. "Mommy," I said, "Can I go over to a friend's house for diiner tomorrow?"

"What friend?" she asked a little surprised. We both knew that I didn't have any friends. Then she smiled. "Is this friend a boy?"

I giggled a little bit and said, "Maybe..."

"Ooo-la-la!" she said teasingly. I blushed and turned my head away.

"So can I go?" I asked.

"You'll have to ask Jeff, but it should be fine!" she said as she smiled at me. I frowned at the thought of asking Jeff.

"Al right..." I said quietly. We both stood and walked out of my room. My mom went to go take a shower and I walked over to where Jeff was sitting, watching television. I sat down quietly next to him and waited for a commercial to come on.

"What do you want?" he asked as the first commercial appeared.

"A guy from my school invited me over for dinner tomorrow night and I was wondering if I could go...mom said it was fine if it was OK with you..." I said hesitantly.

"What's his name?" he asked as he continued to stare at the t.v.

"Adam," I said as I looked at the carpet. I was almost sure that he was going to say no.

"Ya, that should be fine. Now get out of here, my program is back on!" he said as he stared at the screen intently watching 2 skaters make their way out to the middle of the rink.

I forced myself to hold my laughter until I made it into my bedroom. I couldn't believe that a man as mean as Jeff loved figure skating as much as he did. He always told me that when he was my age he wanted to be a professional, but he didn't have the money to get a good trainer. As soon as I closed my bedroom door I burst into laughter.


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Comments:

What a looser (i mean Jeff), he kills her dreams because he is so miserable. I am the first:)

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

this storys amazing please update soon..

i can relate to it soo mchh i kinda have the same problems at hmee.

how old r youuu??

from taylorr

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I am 16

YAY THIRD POSTER! *feels so privaleged* hmm... why id Jeff letting her go to Adam's... does he know him? O.o *stares @ the screen intently*

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

i love it why is she alowd to go to Adam's? update soon plez

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

All your questions will be answered in time

I can see this is going to be interesting..

(POSSIBLE SPOILER) I'm thinking when Taylor goes to Adam's house that something is going to happen between the two of them *giggles madly*. xD

Moore please.


Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol

woooooooooow. figure skating..............and jeff.....................does not mix.

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

write more and let me no its very good
tillz

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Update it! I started reading and my eyes were like glued to the comptuer screen!!

Just a comment

Please don't use swear words, I'd rather not read a book with swears

can you find substitute words for the swear words?

plz

just a suggestion

thx

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sorry and please don't take my response in a bad way, because I'm not trying to be rude, but in the first version of this story I wrote it on a site where swear words were not aloud. Now that I am aloud to use swear words on this site I'm noticing how much stronger it makes my writing. If this means that I'm going to lose you as a read then that sucks, but I'm still going to continue to write this way.

wow i wasn't expecting him to say "yes" lol XD.

-Masha

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

There will be a lot of unexpected events in this novel! *Evil Laugh*

whoa!
Jeff allowed her to go@
o.O

that's a surprise but a good one!! ^-^

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

ladylaur
(not registered user)

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Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Yay! It's updated!

lol

good chapter wasn't expecting him to let her go.

anywayzie, good job!

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol thanx

this seriously reminds me of "In A Perfect World"....

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol, I'm very sorry...it's a completely different story line though once you get farther into it!

kay

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

I hate Jeff. lol. he seem so mean. lol. but I am liking Adam...but according to the thingy he is going to get somewhat annoying. lol.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha



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