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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 21, 2008    Reads: 214    Comments: 8    Likes: 1   


The next day went by slowly. I just spent my time getting ready for going over to Adam's house for dinner. I remember thinking how hipocrytical I was.

I looked in the mirror one last time. My hair was perfectly placed, my make up was perfectly applied, and my outfit fit my body perfectly. I walked out to the living room, past Jeff.

"Where are you going?" he asked angrily.

"You said I could go to my friend's house for dinner...remember?" I asked in a shaky voice. I prayed that he wouldn't change his mind last second.

"Oh yeah...be back by midnight!" he said as he grabbed a handful of popcorn and shoved it in his mouth.

'Holy shit what's he been smokin'?' I thought to myself as I smiled and nodded at him. I walked out of the house and headed to the spot I told Adam I would wait for him.

When I got there he was just pulling up in his car. It looked so expensive!

"Hey," I said as he got out of the car. I smiled at him, and he smiled back.

"You look so beautiful!" he said as he walked up to me. He leaned down and kissed me on the cheek. I blushed slightly.

"Thank you," I whispered.

He smiled at my shyness and walked over to the passenger car door. He opened it for me and took my hand. Gently, he pulled me over to him. He leaned in to kiss my lips. I decided to be a little playful so I giggled and sat down in the passenger seat, so he didn't get his kiss. Honestly I didn't think I was ready to kiss him yet. I always wanted my first kiss to be something really special. He frowned and leaned down again. He gently, but forcefully held my chin in his hands so I couldn't turn away. He kissed my lips gently. I enjoyed it, but I still wish he would have waited. I didn't want to let him know I was disappointed so I smiled at him. He must have sensed my tension because then he kissed the tip of my nose lightly. I couldn't help but giggle a little bit.


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Comments:

aaaaaaaaw, cute! Update soon :)
Sorry to bother you but do you think that you could please take time to check out and comment on some of my work like 'teenage slave' or 'My inconvenient truth'

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

i love love love love love lots of love it update soon and sorry to say this but can you try to make the ch a little longer plez plez plez

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol it's ok i'll try it's just that i'm on vacation with my fam and it's hard to write long chapters while i'm here

yay. go adam...........well at least for now. good job!
~Lemon

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

YAY I LOVE IT ..LOVE IT
that is all i can say

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe thank you


Awww its so cute. Like pre-love stage cute. I love it. Keep doing your thing and hope your still having fun :)

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Aww! Cuteness! lol

Adam is sweet.....well right now......

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

she giggles alot.... PFFT i'm not a giggly type *shudders*

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

ok, you have me laughing alot. lol. Adam is sooo sweet. lol.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha



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