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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 462    Comments: 7    Likes: 1   


He stood back up, and shut the passenger door gently. As he walked around to the other side of the car, I stared out the window at the sky. When he got into the driver's side I turned my attention back to him. "Hello," he said with a smile on his face.

I giggled a little bit. "Hello," I replied.

"Put your seatbelt on," he ordered as he started the engine.

I quietly put my seatbelt on, and he did the same. "Seat belt on!" I said jokingly.

He chuckled a little bit and then said, "Hang on tight baby!. I drive pretty fast!"

It annoyed me how he called me baby, and forced me to kiss him when we weren't even boyfriend/girlfriend. Call me old fashioned, but still.

He wasn't lying when he said he drove fast. We got back to his house in less then 10 minutes. His house was normally a 30 minute drive if you followed all the laws and signs.

As he turned off the engine I just sat in my passenger seat, scared out of my mind. He chuckled a little when he saw the expression on my face. "Come on sweetie let's go inside!" he said as he got out of the car.

I slowly got out of the car and followed him inside of his house.


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Comments:

Sorry I didn't post a longer chapter, but i have to go to bed because i have to get up way early cause my rents are taking me horse back riding along the beach...

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

lucky you :D

Anyways, update soon plz

Posted: Jun 25, 2008


Lucky XD
Tis ok that its short atleast its something. Looking foreward to the next update.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

i have a bad feeling that something bad is going to happen

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Your feelings may be correct

Hmmmm.....sounds fishy to me.

Short is okay. Can't wait for more!

=D

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Sweety?

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

yes?

The begining was a lot like one of the stories i was writing, but i sucked at it so i stopped. lol. continuing now...

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha if it's the one i'm thinking of it didn't suck



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