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"He Is Just Too Strong"

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Follow Taylor's story as she falls in love with a seemingly perfect guy, only to find out later on that he is severely abusive, possessive, and obsessive! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 27, 2008    Reads: 418    Comments: 14    Likes: 1   


As he closed the door behind us he said, "My dad is working so we can pretty much do whatever we want. He won't be home till late. I thought we would just order pizza for dinner, and watch a couple movies.

"Sounds like a plan," I said as I smiled at him.

Just then the phone rang, and he ran to answer it. "Hey dad," he said after he looked at caller ID.

There was a pause.

Then he said, "I'm just hanging out with my girlfriend. Don't worry dad we'll be fine!"

There was another pause.

"We're just going to order pizza and watch a couple movies!" he said. I could hear the irritation in his voice.

Again there was a pause.

"Ya, whatever!" he said as he hung up the phone. He waited a few moments, before he looked up at me and smiled. "Sorry about that baby!"

"Why did you just tell your dad that I was your girlfriend?" I asked quietly. I was getting irritated with his assumptions that I was OK with everything.

He wrapped his arms around me, and whispered, "Because by the end of tonight, I hope you will be!"


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Comments:

erm!x!..
creepy much!..
ooh.. nd realli irritatin too!x!.. =P..
update sOOn!x!
xoxoxoxox

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Adam is a little creepy i love it though update soon plez

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

the-n
(not registered user)

jeesh can he be even creepier cnt he just calm down with the relationship thing i think i remember wat happens next

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

It's gonna be a little different then it was on the n...

hmmm adam is getting a bit creepy ..... really creepy ...oh god what is he going to do ...i would have left ...update soon

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

I read it all and it's great. I love your stories, I feel as though I can relate to some of them. Keep writing! I love it.

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I shall and thank you muches

Wow, very powerful. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

the-n's story reader
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WoW Pretty CREEPY i hope she leaves ...LIKE NOW

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

OH NO. I was starting to like Adam, and now he is a creeper. =(

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sowy

Adam turns out to be like...............so creepy!??!

but uh! anyways i like the story.......plzz update ASAP!!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

hmmm adam sounds abit controlling but umm i guess the story line is still great keep writing

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

CREEP! please update soon

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

UGH! self-centered egotistical sob thinks he's all tha' annyoing a-whole! *mutters*

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Whoa calm down

Ok, he is getting somewhat creepy........lol. dang he was so sweet before. lol. wow this is a really good story.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

Very creepalicous. Lqtm. I love the suspense, but seriously, does it have to be this painful! Great story by the way!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks



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