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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

683,000 forcible rapes occur every year, which equals 56,916 per month, 1,871 per day, 78 per hour, and 1.3 per minute. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 445    Comments: 19    Likes: 5   


"Why do I have to go?" I yelled and my dad.

My psycho parents wanted me to..."accompany them to a small quaint cabin next to the lake"...that's what the letter I found on my nightstand said anyway.

I then wrote a letter back saying that I politely turn down the invitation.

My dad replied with a letter that said something like..."Well, you can politely pack your bags because you're going! No choice..."

I blame them for what happened to me there.

"Because Kasey this is a family vacation, and I want both of my daughter's there not just the youngest." my dad said back as he read the daily paper. He didn't even look up at me.

"But dad, I was supposed..." I started to say, but my mother cut me off.

"You were supposed to go to a concert...we know, we know!" she sneered. "We know how badly you wanted to go to the concert, but you have to com with us!"

I gave up on even trying to convince them otherwise and stormed up to my bedroom. After slamming and locking the door I blasted one of my CDs.

I got packed and then sat down on my bed and waited for some one to come up to my room and tell me it was time to leave.

About half an hour later I heard a knock on my door so I turned off my music and grabbed my bags. I walked angrily down the stairs and then out to the car, where my mom and twin sister were waiting. I put my bag down on the ground for my dad to put in the trunk and then slid inside next to my twin. Without saying a word I put my ipod's ear phones in my ears. As my dad slid into the driver seat I turn on the first song on my ipod and closed my eyes.

I hate family vacations...

When we were driving past the beach near the cabin I saw a really cute guy. He looked like he was a jock, but I didn't really care. 'Hopefully Melony will start dating him and then I'll be able to see him more often,' was my only though. I knew he wouldn't be into me...jocks never fall for emos. That's only in fairytales and movies.

When we fianlly reached the cabin I went straight up to the bedroom I always slept in while we were at the cabin. I put my bag on the floor near the dresser, and grabbed a towel and my pjs.

It was about 9 at night so I ended up just taking a really long shower and going to bed.


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Comments:

Ohh... I like it. =] Post more soon... I wanta know what happens. I bet the cute guy at the beach rapes her. =P

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol well I guess you shall find out

*waiting patiently*

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

its really good so far cant wait to read the rest

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

I think quite conversely to Kyoshi14.. Maybe, he's the guy you saves her from a the crazy rapist? =P
Anyway keep updating.
Much love,
Srushti xx

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Maybe, he's the guy who saves her from a the crazy rapist? =P

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

ha!..
i knew it was onlii a matter of tym..
u cnt av less dn 3 novels @ a time cn u?!..
xlolx...

u wer ryt..
lovin it soo far!..

update soon!!...

*fidgeting & waiting impatiently..*
xox

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Well 3 is a very good number
And 2(along with every other even number) is just evil and horrible and yeah
So 3 novels at a time is a good thing :)

the-n's story reader
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Yay new story new story *jumps up and down*

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

reader
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i remember dis story on the-n update soon

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

This a really gud start cant wait to read the rest....

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

ooo really good...reading more!!!!

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Tehe

I like it so far...but...idk, have you ever though of people who've actually been through this? Of course, I don't know yet if it'll happen the way I think it will and I'm sure you're saying "well, if you don't like it, don't read it." , I don't know...I don't see why everybody thinks rape's so great. I read this one thing where this character on lost gets raped by the 'others' and that's all it is.

It's a horrible experience, and I think some people are hurting those who have actually experience this.

Idk, your story is good so far, and I don't mean to judge or anything, and please don't hate me.

What do you think about rape? do you think it's so peaches and cream? Like they just rape you and then leave?

you should read this book called 'Forever, My Love' by Rebecca Brandewyne.

The poor girl gets raped by her freaking COUSIN!! It's gross, but really, really depressing. it's not enjoyable at all, and some people may think that, but it's totally not...unless for some reason - you liked this guy in the first place, or he's like a incubus or something.

Anyways - some of you might be like "wtf, jeez! it's just a story!" but even if some person who got raped doesn't even mean to read it, and just reads the summary - it's just...Idk.

I don't actually think that you're all "yay rape!", but people take it so lightly. There's a lot of scarring that needs to be repared, on people like that.

Anyways, that's the end of my rant.(laughs nevously).

I'm sorry if this offended you in any way, it wasn't supposed to. I DO like your story though.

I just--

Okay, i'm stopping.

...okay, well, keep at it. I plan on reading (I promise I won't do this again. haha. ), so yeah, I 'm sure it will be great *holy bejeebus this is a long comment*. :)

Good luck.

Dannika,

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Um...not sure what to comment to this...so many things I could say at this moment...but none that I feel like sharing.

All i feel comfortable saying is that this novel isn't all 'yay rape' as you put it. It shows the true effects of rape.


I'm an author and just wrote a book called, "Friends of Darkness."

I liked your begining and you got it as close to the middle of the story.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading

Yeah, that's what I kind of thought. kk, and would that be like you hate me now? Coz I didn't mean to be rude, I was just saying how I felt - and I don't think it was you that was like that, just the way others commented or reacted to this story. And I know you're not 'yay rape', I didn't say you were. S' all good, k? Sorry if I hurt.

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry I tend to get defensive when it comes to my novels...this one in particular.

Yeah, it's my fault. I tend to judge before I think. I'm really, really sorry, I totally didn't mean that it's bad or anything. Really, really i didn'tmean that. I was just a little confused (still a little shocked from that other little story I started reading).

Thanks, sorry. :S

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Tay

Pretty normal enough...now I wonder where your tags are gin' to fit in...

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

This is sounding good.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Girl...you better love me! I updated my story...it isn't the best chapter...but whatever! lol.


NOW ADD MORE TO THIS ONE!!! (or you wont see another chapter for a while!) muhahaha

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

AH! Yay! I love you!

Ok, there are two new chapters up on the story you keep begging me to post more of. (and another on all my other stories lol)

So, I posted them, now post another of this, or no more story for a while. lol.

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Ok...I'm bad at this whole, I'm not posting more...thing....Ok, so I posted ONE more..and I am seriously done this time! You will not see another one until there is more of this one!!!!!!!



Seriously...I can do this...I am strong!

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha well ms. strong i shall try to please you



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