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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

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Submitted: Aug 11, 2008    Reads: 536    Comments: 22    Likes: 2   


Nate moved in front of Melony and I, trying to protect us. He glared intently at Alex as Melony held me closely.

Alex smirked and took a step forward. He held out his hand to me, and said in a soft and inviting tone, "Come here Kasey."

Nate pushed Alex's hand away angrily and said in a cold tone, "She's not going anywhere with you!"

"Oh I think she is," Alex said as he took a gun from an inside pocket on his jacket and pointed it towards Melony. "Kasey if you don't come here right now I'll kill her. Is that what you want?"

"No," I whimpered through my tears as I took a step towards him. I tried to force myself to move forward, but my body refused. He reached forward and pulled me to him. I yelped out of fear, but was too afraid for Melony to pull away.

"If either of you two tell anyone about this I'll kill her. Understand?" he asked them in a stern tone.

They both nodded out of fear. He grabbed my wrist tightly and put his gun away. "We're going back to my house for a while. If you create a scene I promise you that you'll regret it later." he whispered angrily.

I tried to hide my pain and fear as he pulled me along behind him out to his truck. He managed to get me outside without any teachers noticing, but by the time he got me there I had a bruise on my wrist where he had been holding.


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Comments:

Oh, HECK NAW! __translates into: HELL NO!___ wHY CAN'T HE JUST DIE ALREADY?

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

unh uh kick him where lil jr is and get on already

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Okay the sister and friend need to all 911 and get the police on this!

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

911 confuses me! Anyway I love it! Ofcourse you had to have a sorta cliff-hanger! Well i shall be waiting!*sits staring at the computer screen patient,for now*

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hate him i hate him and by him i mean Alex. GERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR i love it update soon plez

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

kaylalebreton
(not registered user)

oh my god!
i could see him just going to kill her sister and friend.
cuz he is that kind of person!

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Bloody freaking hell!! !! !! he's such a freaking tool!

Dani,

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

ugh i hate Alex ...i cant belive u left us all hangin like that but we will wait lol....i cant stop reading it it is sooooo good ....okay i will stop ranting ...update soon it is really good

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks for reading

omg! no no no!

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

omigosh, omigosh, omigosh!!! plz read my book of warriors (the second chapter), I'm so psyched!!! And I'm really happy coz I really like the characters in it!!!!

Yay!

thanks,

Dani,

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

person
(not registered user)

Typical....

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Shizzz.......... .... .. . ...... ..... how sad! *is so tired and woozey that her head hits the key board and she lets out a loud snore* (sorry i haven't been getting enough sleep lately...)

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

UPDATE

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Girl, you need toughin' up! After he put the gun away.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

OML,(Oh my lanta) this is so good. You need to update soon!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I shall as soon as I can

damn....wats wrong with that dude anyways good story pms

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nooooooooooooooooooooooo. well well well, this Alex kid has nooooo life. seriously...he's hot apparently, couldn't he have found something better to do with his life? good lord.
Ok, now i want to read more...*stares at screen...patiently...for a little while....*

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha sowy I didn't post more last night. I was gonna but ya I got distracted.


CRAP! Not good. Its like he's a friggin spy with super ears. Better yet he had a spiderman moment where he went "My Kasey snitching senses are tingling" lol. That just really sucked. Okay guess ill wait for a new post.
*sits and waits impatiently*
Im not a patient person but you've got the benifit of the doubt since the story is muy good.

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Love IT

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Tisk tisk..distractions distractions....hm, POST MORE!!


oh, and i lost my flash drive...so i have to start my next chapter over...sorry. :) lol

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

poooooooossssssttttt ppppppplllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so tired right now i'm about to pass out

FOUND MY FLASH DRIVE!!!!!

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! Please please please post



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