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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

683,000 forcible rapes occur every year, which equals 56,916 per month, 1,871 per day, 78 per hour, and 1.3 per minute. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 28, 2008    Reads: 444    Comments: 18    Likes: 1   


Then I recognized him. He was one of the men at the party Alex had raped me at. I knew that if he recognized me he would tell Alex. I wasn't sure which was worse...going back to Alex or staying with him.

He grabbed me by my hair and dragged me over to a cage that was sitting in one of the corners of the room. I hadn't seen it before. It was large enough for me to sit up inside, and if I curled up I would have been able to lay down. He opened the door and pushed my body inside, forcing the door closed. He then locked it so I wouldn't be able to get out.

"Go to sleep, you stupid slut!" he said angrily as he walked back over to his couch. He turned off the small lamp that was sitting on the floor near the couch and then layed down.

I tried to hold back my tears as I layed in that uncomfortable position. I couldn't sleep, and I was too afraid to scream for help.

He didn't wake up till noon the next day, and that was only because some one was knocking on his door. He covered the cage with a blanket and told me that if I made a sound he'd slit my throat.

I heard him answer the door and then I heard the most dreadful sound I would ever hear. I heard Alex asking if he had seen the girl in a picture he was holding. I had a feeling he was talking about me, but I wondered how he had gotten a picture of me.

"She's yours? I caught the little bitch sleepin' on my couch last night. She's over here." I heard the man who was keeping me in the cage say as he led Alex over to me. He took the blanket off the cage and started to unlock the lock.

"No. Keep her in there," Alex said as he stared coldly at me.

"Huh?" the man asked as he looked at Alex confused.

"Help me get this cage out to my truck." Alex said.

They picked the cage up, with me still in it, and carried it out to Alex's truck. They put me in the back, and then attached the blanket to cage so no one would see that I was in there. I was too afraid to say anything to Alex, even though I knew it would make him less mad at me. I heard them get into the truck, and then I felt the truck moving. I didn't know where they were taking me, I jsut knew that it was going to be bad.


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Comments:

o no please no ugh ugh ugh he has her again but i am not sure if thats a good thing or a bad thing ..well it is a bad thing but i hope (fingers crossed) that he is better then that other guys but alex did keep her in the cage so i dont know hmmmmm

YAY first post lol
update again when you can
i love it
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
UPDATE ASAP befor i go CRAZY lol

kk thats all i will stop buggin you
if u are even still readin this lol it is really good like everythin you write ...i think i have read everything u have done ..wow i have no life but ya anyways lol

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

its really good
love this story so far
keep up the good work

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

omg! omg! someone gots to help her!!

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Oh F***!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

nooooooo omg omg help her nooo

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

you're doing that "Hate one moment then Love the next" thing D:

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I am?
Oh
...oh well
*Shrugs and skips away*

Please Update!!

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

...Damn. That's NOT good x.x You keep on changing the plot, which is something I can NOT accomplish. I just want to kick Alex's ass and throw him off a cliff.

...In other words, great job! xD

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

arg! yes like how the pirates "arg"
ya i dont like Alex, and having a burning cigarette butt burn your skin hurts like.... well a few words

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

*skips after you, takles you, then tickle tourtures you* *looks at my jeans* awww man i got gras stains cause of you! and these are my favorite pair of skinney jeans... *pouts*

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha well if it helps I'm not prego
So be happy

hey hey!!..
=D..
elloo wifey..

lov iit!..
wnt more ..
now!!!!!..

dnt make me com ova der!..
grr..

xlolx

luff yooh
x

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha otay ms "let's not go on booksie in like fuckin ever and leave my readers in total suspense"

0_0

OHHHHHHH update soon plez i love it

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Oh no no no!!! Whats gonna happen *bites fingernails*

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha glad your enjoying

This is becca: OMG i just read all of this! tori showed it to me last yr but DAM it got brilliant! i missed a lot of greatness by not continueing reading this shiz! AMAZING! ur brilliant tori and i love u and your writing!

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

WRITE MORE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*stares at the screen...waiting waiting waiting...still waiting.* UPDATE

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

yay! lol

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

U HAVE TO POST MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Posted: Sep 1, 2008



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