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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

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Submitted: Sep 4, 2008    Reads: 182    Comments: 14    Likes: 3   


After a while I felt the truck stop and I heard the doors open, then close. I felt them pick up the cage, but I didn't know where I was until they removed the blanket off the top of the cage. We were on a dock above the ocean. Alex started to tie a rope to the top of the cage while the man that had been holding me captive checked the lock on the cage door.

"Please don't hurt me Alex," I whispered as I stared up with him in fear.

He shot me a cold look and I cringed back slightly. The man that had been holding me captive smirked slightly. Alex picked the cage up and started to carry it towards the edge of the dock, but I didn't realie what was going on until I felt myself falling. I took a deep breath right before the cage submerged under the ocean water. It was freezing cold!

It seemed like forever until Alex pulled the cage back to the surface of the water, but not yet up onto the dock.

"This is going to continue on untill I feel that you have learned your lesson," Alex said before once more lowering me under the water. I was able to get in a quick breath before going completely under again.

I didn't know if I was going to be able to hold my breath long enough that time, but just as I was about to give up and except my fate he brought the cage to the top again.

"You'll stay under the water for 30 seconds, and above the water for 5," he said before lowering me once again. I took in a deep breath, just in time.

This lasted for about half an hour before he finally brought the cage back ontop of the dock. I was taking in deep breaths, and my eyes were still closed. I was only concentrated on my breathing. I didn't even realize it had stopped untill I felt Alex pulled me out of the cage.

"Get up, you lazy cunt!" he said coldly.

I used all my strength to try to get up, but I had only gotten onto my knees before my body collapsed and I passed out.


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Comments:

i really like it keep up to good work.

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Someone needs to shoot that asshole.

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

i agree i hate him
keep writeing it is really good

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

omg! write moreee

Posted: Sep 5, 2008


Omg that butt!! As Nita Eads said he needs to be shot. Hate him with a passion along with his friend.

I see no errors lol. (Stupid english class has me looking for them now)

Keep going. Cant wait till the next update :)

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

oh wtf did he just call her?! *has a conniption, and that's not a good thing*

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha oh ya warning...this chapter has language issues

i really love it update soon plez

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Man...its called a gun...i'm a gonna get one...shoot him in both a**cheeks and then in the foot, and then in the arm...make sure that I get it plenty painful enough and then i'm a gonna get on my pony and run over him and if that doesn't kill him painfully i'll just...well I am afraid that I don't want to say that on the computer where lots of people can see it...they may think i'm some sort of physo...haha anyways loved it as usual!!!

Sorry i'm a country girl! ^^ that may be something only we would do :)

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Hell no. I'm a country girl too, and horses are always helpful in a fight against evil ass holes! :)

man that alex wat is wrong wit him and cheetah bears comment is funni

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya alex is a little coo coo

love it! I agree w/ NitaEads too. that idiot needs to be shot (and possibly tortured into insanity..) =)

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I like the torture idea :)

that is one of the worst tortures somebody can do
but good job

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

What! This is bring me to tears. She is going to be traumatize for life. She is not going to trust no men and she will have to see a psychiatric every day. Please update soon. Can't wait for the next update.

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

it's not that i just get REALLY offended if i hear that word... or read it...

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Mhm...

Good thing it wasn't directed towards you then huh

yeah... thats an understatement lol... i REALLY hate that word

Posted: Sep 21, 2008



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