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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

683,000 forcible rapes occur every year, which equals 56,916 per month, 1,871 per day, 78 per hour, and 1.3 per minute. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 11, 2008    Reads: 157    Comments: 13    Likes: 1   


When I woke up I wasn't sure where I was. I was laying on a bed, but the room was dark. I slowly stood up felt my way around untill I felt the light switch.

As soon as the lights went on I knew where I was. I was back in the room where all my nightmares happened. I was in the room Alex raped me in. I was in the room I vowed I would never enter again. I heard some one trying to unlock the bedroom door, and I ran over to the closet. I knew it was childish but I didn't want to see whoever was coming in. I closed the closet door and crouched in the corner of the cramped space. I heard footsteps in the bedroom and then the closet door opened.

I heard Alex chuckle. He squated down and asked, "Who are you hiding from?"

I closed my eyes and tried to wish him away. I was getting desperate.

He chuckled again and took my hand lightly. He pulled me a little closer then picked me up. He bought me over to the bed and set me down on it. "If you struggle, i'll kill you!" he said coldly as he took a gun and set it on top of the nightstand.

He started to kiss me, and touch me. He took off my clothes, and then he took off his clothes.

I stared out the window at the night sky as he fucked me. I tried not to cry or struggle, but as he finished silent tears were streaming down my face.

As he got off of me I tried to fall asleep. I just wanted to get away from him. I felt something prick into my arm and then I felt the weight of Alex on the bed next to me again. I started to feel very weak and tired. "I'm sorry Kasey. That little run away stunt you pulled got Melody and Nate to go to the cops. It wouldn't be very good if they found us together now would it? Maybe in our next lifetime," he said. I felt his lips press against mine, as I slowly drifted into a very deep sleep. I never awoke.

THE END


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Comments:

F*(K!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I should have known!!!! (OR as the title says-she should have told!)

Posted: Sep 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha sorry
Check out my new novel

The Pain He Caused

What! It this the end?! She DIED! I'm in tears right about now. I can't believe I'm crying right now! Wow! Can't think right now.

Posted: Sep 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha maybe it would help if you checked out my new novel

The Pain He Caused

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMFG that is all i can say omg thats thats just so aweful omg but it was so good omg she died ....sheesh it almost made me cry like i am on the verge of tears omg sheesh
that was so good

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

you had to end it *crying* i love it though and gerrrrrrrrr

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

DUDE WTF!!! aaahhh i said happy ending!!!! good lord. lol...its good though! I liiike it.

oooo i hate him!

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

gr?...rawr?... ah?!.... what?.... wtf?!!!!..... boo!
that was depressing honey

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :D


wat are u serious omg no he kille her ugh i hate him so much oh this is danny rules but i'm on my friends account lol manur such a great writer

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe thank you so much

Woah. Really powerful ending to a really well written novel

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou! :D

WOW!
did bot see that coming.
very good♥
you r a very very good writer:)
hope you write more storys.
loved it♥

Posted: Sep 14, 2008


Holy...
That was not expected....
Im still sitting here mouth wide open in disbelief...
Wow... just wow...
Good story though :)
Onto the next one XD

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

YOU KILLED HER!?

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Uh-huh

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO DONT KIIL HER MAKE IT A DREAM OR SOME THIND PLEASE

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

what the hell? lol i liked it, but i really think it ended like too fast, thats all

Posted: Oct 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry



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