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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

683,000 forcible rapes occur every year, which equals 56,916 per month, 1,871 per day, 78 per hour, and 1.3 per minute. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15

Submitted: Jul 17, 2008    Reads: 344    Comments: 26    Likes: 3   


The next morning I got up at 7 like I always did. After doing ruitine things to get ready for the day and changing into my jogging clothes, I wrote a note for my parents telling them I would be back by 10.

I grabbed the bag that I always took with me when I jogged and headed out the door. The small bag contained my drawing journal, a few drawing pencils, my proffessional camera, and of course my water bottle.

I started to job around the lake and stopped every once in a while to take a picture and get a drink.

Once I found a good spot, I sat down against a tree and took out my drawing pad. At first I wasn't sure what I should draw, but then I saw him. The cute boy from the lake was playing frisby with his golden retriever not to far from where I was sitting. I took out my camera and snapped a few pictures and then started to draw.

I had almost finished the picture when the dog came running up to me. I giggled and pet him as he licked my face. Then I noticed a piece of paper tied to his collar. I took it off to see what it said.

'Hey I'm Alex, what's your name pretty lady?' The handwritting was neat, and easy to read. I looked up and saw him leaning agianst a tree looking at me a couple yards away.

I tried to hide my smile as I wrote my response underneath his writing. 'I'm sorry Alex, I was told never to pass notes with strangers. Thank you for the compliment though.'

As the dog ran back to his owner with my response I put all my things away.

"Well then I guess we will have to stop passing notes," Alex said as he sat down on the grass in front of me.

I laughed a little.

"So are you going to tell me your name?" he asked with a sly smile on his face.

I shook my head no, trying to hide my smile.

"Why's that?" he asked.

"I was told never to talk to strangers either," I replied still trying to hide back a smile.

"Well if I knew your name we wouldn't be strangers. We would be aquantences," he replied as he leaned his upper body towards me a little.

"I suppose that's true," I said while I leaned forward a little bit as well.

"So what is it?" he asked as he leaned so close to me that our lips were almost touching.

"Kasey," I replied as I stared into his deep blue eyes. He was so gorgeous!

"Kasey may I kiss you?" he asked seductively.

"I think I would need to get to know you a little more before I give you my first kiss," I said shyly

"Well, I'm 18 years old. My name is Alex. I'm only child, and I really want to kiss you..." he said as he stared deeply into my eyes. "May I?"

I blushed and nodded my head. He leaned closer until our lips met. He pushed me gently against theĀ  tree and continued to passionately kiss me. It seemed to last for forever, and the whole time I was enjoying it.

When the kiss ended he took my hand gently and helped me to my feet. I was light headed and was probably smiling like an idiot, but I didn't care. He picked up my bag for me and wrapped his arm around my shoulders.

"May I walk you home miss?" he asked as he looked down at me.

I giggled and said, "Yes you may!"

We walked like this all the way back to my cabin. His dog followed behind us the entire way, obediantly.


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Comments:

oooooo this is getting good lol but seriously it is good hope to read more

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

OOOOOOOOOO i love it:] update soon plez and if you wouldnt mind can you tellme when you update?

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

YEAH IT'S BACK, when they canceled it on the-n i was soooooo disapointed....... ohh and btw i sent you an n-mail and i really need a responce.... LOVE THE STORY THO

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol oh wow i haven't been on the-n in like forever...wonder if i sill remember my log in info

he's so going to rape her. =P Post more please? =] =P

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

i so remember dis story too luv it by the way lol

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thanks

awesome first 2 chapters
Update me when you post the rest??
:]

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

its good so far keep going i wanna know whay happens next
please and thank you

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol k

the-n's story reader
(not registered user)

No don't show him where you live OMG he screams possible Rapist

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol

aaaww.. diis is soo adorable..
but i know u too well torii..

things r not all dey seem..
*mysterious evil smile*..

update.. SOON!!..

xox

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol sowy cup cake you know i gotta make you love the bad man before i make you hate him

haha i love it keep up the good work, i cant wait to see what happens (well i kinda know *sad face*) but i also wanna know what happens after *that* (sad face) lol ok just keep writting, ill try and find you again lol...PS do you know how to add friends on thsi thing, im new.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Go to the person's profile and chose the become a fan thing...that's as close as you will get to adding friend's

YEAAAHHH great sooo farrrr love it

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you muches

This is awesome so far i cant wait to read the next chapter!!

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

OO cute guy just comes up and talks to her, also knows WHERE she lives, also kissed her in the first minute of knowing her, and her name *counts the little read flags going up* THAT'S FOUR! CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPY!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha that's funny

He'd better not rape her...he's to hott. haha. no seriously dont make him rape her!!! please!!! he can save her from rape!!! lol

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

This is getting very intereseting. If you wouldn't mind doing so, please feel free to check out my first novel, and leve some feedback. It would be greatly appreciated.

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

**Phew**...:) Good. That's so much better than I thought it would be. :) Ooh, routine, and aquaintances. But, seriously dude! Good job. :)

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

...Is this some kind of joke>? You bash my work and then say 'Good job :) :) :)' ...no...not how the reak world works.

Wow! They move fast!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008



Now, I've read chapter two and liked it. Can't wait to see what happens in the middle?

I hate to add but watch your spelling, as I know I have trouble with that too.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I'll try to remember to double check my spelling lol

I totally did NOT bash your work. Or, well, I didn't mean to anyways. Perhaps you didn't understand - I was merely asking what you thought - because of the direction it was going. And i said good job because, well, it didn't play out as I'd feared. So many people take rape so lightly, and you didn't! That's why I said good job.

And no, i'm not joking - and I really didn't mean to make you feel bad in any way or 'bash' your work.

dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Like I said I can get defensive...really defensive when it comes to my novels. I'm sorry for being a bitch

Haha. you're not being a bitch. Mostly when I read it i felt bad - coz you don't deserve my stupidness. haha. It's okay, though. Everybody's defensive when it comes to their creations, coz, well, they've put work and time into it. And then some cuntface comes along and starts critiquing (however you spell that) it, and it's just like lay off, dude. But, I understand what you mean. I think I'll stick to constructive critisism from now on. :)

I do like your story now, tho.

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha no critiquing is fine

I just don't like judging lol

Yeah, sorry bout that. :( ouch i'm bleeding. :(

Heyy, I was reading your profile thingy, you're wiccan, that's sweet! I don't think I can be wiccan coz I'm christian - but I still think that's cool.

Sorry if this is confusing - but do you like Hecate? Or is it like the moon goddess or somethin'. idk, sorry, I just read a few books - but there were two different people. And then Haxa and Hena (or something like that). I'm curious, it's awesome.

Dani,

ps. didn't mean to sound forward or whatnot. :)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes I am Wiccan. There are many different Gods and Goddess's in Wicca. I haven't chosen the two I'm going to study under yet.

Oh. kk. Mm, I read this book called 'dark deeds on a winter's night', (i believe) by Kresley Cole - it's got a witch named Mariketa in it - and she totally battles with Haxa!! I think in the book Hecate was kind of neutral, right? She was part evil partk good - and then, in the book, Haxa was the evil one and He...something was the good one. :) i don't know if that's true, but that's what Kresley Cole played with in the book. I thought it was neat.

Anyways...

That's sweet that you're doing that. I have my own kind of magic. :)

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha you should read the Sweep series by...crap I forgot by who...but it's a really good series!

Cute! But kiss on the first day? Oh, c'mon! He's so a threat...

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

The Sweep Series? Okay..I'll google it. haha.

Heyy, could you read my story. It's only one chapter so it shouldn't take long (and feel free to "bash" it) :)

Thanks, if you want. :)

Dani,

What's sweep about anyways?

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

It's about witchcraft and love and betrayal and friendship

Yeah! I was reading about it on Wikipedia! haha. It sounds pretty sweet!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

What? She just met the guy and she let him kiss her? That is what make guys think most girls are easy! She should use her brains.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008



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