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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

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Submitted: Jul 18, 2008    Reads: 304    Comments: 12    Likes: 1   


When we finally got back to the cabin I opened the door and was immediatly yelled at to take my shoes off. Alex did as he was told and actually took the time to wipe his dog's paws off with his hankerchiff. I couldn't help but laugh at him. I on the otherhand kept my shoes on and walked into the study, where my parents were sitting.

"What is that thing doing in this house?" my mom screeched as she jumped ontop of the couch and pointed to Maxy, Alex's dog. She always had been afraid of dogs.

Alex got a sort of worried look on his face, but I laughed and said, "Relax mother! Alex cleaned his paws off."

"The dog can clean his own paws off? Damn, that's my kind of dog!" my dad said jokingly.

"The dog's name is Maxy, not Alex." I said in an annoyed tone. My dad was so lame sometimes. Alex on the other hand was laughing at my dad's comment.

"Who's this?" dad asked sternly now realizing tht Alex was in the room.

"Well, if the dog's name is Maxy then this must be Alex!" I said sarcastically.

"You shouldn't talk like that to your parents," Alex said sternly.

"Why not? They talk to me like that," I said a little surprised by his comment.

"Yes, but they're your elders," he replied.

"He has a point Kasey," my mother said as she stared in fear of the dog who was now sitting perfectly quiet by Alex's side.

"Mom...get off the couch!" I said as I tried to hold back laughter.

"Kasey go to your room. Your mother and I would like to talk to Alex alone. Take the dog with your please," my dad said sternly.

I rolled my eyes and walked to my room, calling Maxy to come with me. Maxy and I layed on my bed while we waited for Alex.

After about half an hour Alex walked into my room. "I passed the test!" he said in a goofy voice as he layed down on the bed next to me.


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Comments:

I wonder whats gonna happen? I like your stpry though!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

hmmm i wonder whats gonna happen hmmm it seems to good to be true hmmm
really good cant wait to read more keep me posted

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

i really like it! i wonder what will happen tho... can't wait to read more! =)

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

I like! Please update soon!

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

I love it update soon plez

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

nice hmmmm i wonder wats he gonna do

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

pweeze update soon......:)

this is going pretty good!

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

ROFLCOPTER the "test"

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

???

he'd better not do it...

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

wow...my parents get suspicious when I'm TXTING guys! They freaking look at my phone (of course that was only one time) haha, but i'm getting, 'who's this Parker?' all the time now! argh!

Anyways, good good. :)

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Sara Moon
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I wonder if that was the boy's cover up?
He was to nice!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

You shall find out

LOL!! Stupid boy!
I'm sensing danger with the bed here though...

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha



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