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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

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Submitted: Jul 20, 2008    Reads: 314    Comments: 14    Likes: 1   


I giggled a little bit and said, "Well, that's good."

"It's definatly good, becuase now I can ask you to go to a party with me tonight...as my date," he said as he played with my hair.

"There's no point in even asking my parents. As soon as they hear the word party it will be an instant no." I said sadly.

"You could always sneak out," he said with a sly smile on his face.

"But I'm supposed to listen to my elders...remember?" I pointed out while I laughed a little.

"But only when I'm trying to get them to like me," he said as he chuckled.

"Fine, but how am I supposed to know where the party is?" I asked.

"I'll meet you at your window tonight at around 9," he said as he stopped playing with my hair and stood up.

"Perfect...where are you going?" I asked as he walked to my bedroom door.

"If I'm going out with a beautiful girl like you tonight I have to go start getting ready," he said as he patted his leg, calling Maxy over to him. "C-ya tonight!" He walked out the door and left me there to get ready. I thought about telling Melony about Alex and the party, but I decided against it. We hadn't spoken in a year so why start then?

I decided to not bother getting ready till about 6. Then I spent an hour trying to pick out the perfect outfit for a perfect night. I decided to wear a tight black long-sleeved mini dress, along with my favorite knee high rocker boots. I straightened my hair and spent a few extra minutes parting it perfectly. The dress showed off my figure and my hair ws actually behaving itself. Everything was adding up for a perfect night!

Finally 9 rolled around and I snuck out of the cabin as quiet as a mouse. I don't think I had ever been so quiet. I saw Alex waiting at the end of the driveway for me. Quietly I walked up behind him and put my hands over his eyes while standing on my tip toes. "Guess who?" I said quietly.

I could feel the smiel form on his face. He took my hands and then turned around. "Wow! You look amazing," he said as he gave me a kiss softly on the lips.


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Posted: Jul 20, 2008

i agree ...it is really good

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

*waiting patiently*

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

I love it update soon plez

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

I really like it!!!!

update soon please!

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks

*witing.. IMpatiently*...
=D..

xox

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

wowww thanks for just cutting it offff ..lol but greattt keep going

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

*looks at the row of six red flags* this is adding up and it's not all that good...

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol

if he does it i might cry. lol.
DON'T MAKE HIM DO IT!

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry

Okay, this is all happening really fast. Maybe it's just coz I read fast, but doesn't it take a while for people to be coming into houses, and kissing? idk. i'm crazy .:)

Dannika.

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha...not in my life...then again...maybe there's a reason i'm called a slut...

I kiss my friend's goodbye...I kiss strangers goodbye...kissing is not that big of a deal to me

sara moon
(not registered user)



Good chapter but watch the spelling again. The boy is a devil!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Sowy

Whatevs! If people wanna call you a slut fuck them! It's your opinion that matters.

Yeah, some people do kiss a lot. haha. Like the french! That's okay tho.

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha hell the french have a kiss named after them cause they kiss so damn much

Aww!
He's so-o going to hurt her huh?
I've got the feeling in my gut that he's going to turn on her....

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

How dump can she be? My goodness. Whatever happened to her she cannot blame it own her parents. Ain't no one tell her to sneak out the house with some guy she barely know. That is what wrong with some females.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha agreed



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