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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

683,000 forcible rapes occur every year, which equals 56,916 per month, 1,871 per day, 78 per hour, and 1.3 per minute. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 21, 2008    Reads: 345    Comments: 17    Likes: 1   


Alex led me to the party as we talked a little bit. As we entered the house where the party was being held at, I noticed that there was only one other girl there. All the men were drinking and laughing as some music played, while the girl was sitting quietly on the couch. "Go sit over there sweetie," Alex said as he pointed to the couch. I quietly walked over and sat down next to the other girl. She looked like she was a huge prep.

"So you must be the other stripper," she said as she turned to face me.

"Excuse me?" I asked in shock. I turned my head to call Alex over, but him and the group of men were all ready walking over. Alex turned the music up a little bit and walked over to me.

"Do you like me as much as I think you do?" he whispered into my ear.

"Yes," I said back. I was so confused, but I knew that Alex would keep me safe. I trusted him.

"Prove it to me," he said with a dark smile on his face as he looked into my eyes.

"What?" I asked quietly. My heart sank, and I knew he had planned this all along.

"Dance for us," he said as he pulled me to my feet and sat down where I had been sititng.

"No," I said in shock.

"Come on Kasey," he said with that same smile on his face. All the men started to cheer.

"I'm going home," I said as I started to walk towards the door.

I felt a man grab my arm and pull me back to the group. Alex pulled me onto his lap and said, "Dance for us!" His tone was stern and demanding. I pushed away from him and made a run for the door.

I heard the laughter from the group as another man caught me. He had a tight grip on both of my upper arms as he forced me back to the group. "Damnit Alex do you always have to chose the wild ones?"  he asked as he held me still.

Alex smirked and said, "You know how I love a challenge!"

"Let her go! Your hurting her," the other girl said.

One of the men instantly back handed her across the face and yelled, "Shut up, stupid whore!"


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Comments:

omg i luv this story you changed it form when it was on the-n and i luv it both ways

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

isabelle08
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omg. write more plzzzzzz

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

yay write more

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

OMFG i hate Adom soo much. i love it update soon plez

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

i love it u changed it but i still love both virgins update pweez

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol versions not virgins

update

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure

Frig!

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Don't like?

a the-n user
(not registered user)

I remember this. I love how you changed it! ( I like it either way lol) I hope the part where it was deleted changes too ha ha

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

Oh no! I like it. I just feel for the poor girl. A gang bang does not sound appealing!

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Definately not

Omg i absolutly love this! you NEED to write more

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha otay

told ya guys about my little red flags! there was like ten right there in that chapter alone!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

WHAT A JERK!!! wait, can you make him let her go? pleeeease. lol

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Sowy

now here's a stronger reason why parents tell us to stay away from strangers. ugh poor Kasey

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, strangers suck monkey balls sometimes

shit, I feel like i'm gonna burst! Freaking Alex! She should... chop his balls off or something.

omg, that brings something up. :) I was reading this other book (Kresley cole i think) and there was this one chick who thought it was fun to rip peoples' spines out and make them crawl for it before decapitating them.

haha. stupid Alex.

Anyways, good job.

Dannika.

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

sara moon
(not registered user)



She got herself in deep this time and I like the way you did it. I have to keep reading. Excellent!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thank you muches

OH NO HE DI'IN'T!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

You see! If she would have used her brains she won't be in this situation. Always think about what the other person really want. I don't want to say that what she get because I don't think any girls she go through that. That can ruin a person

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx 4 reading



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