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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

683,000 forcible rapes occur every year, which equals 56,916 per month, 1,871 per day, 78 per hour, and 1.3 per minute. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 26, 2008    Reads: 794    Comments: 21    Likes: 4   


"Let me go," I begged as I tried to hold back my tears.

"Shut up," the man holding me grumbled as he tightened his grip on my arms.

I whimpered in pain and if he wasn't holding me up I would have fallen to the ground. "Alex please make him stop!" I begged through the tears that were now flowing freely down my face.

I saw Alex's face soften a little bit and then he said, "That's enough Jack." The man that was holding me, who I assumed was Jack, let go of my arms. I fell to the ground, but Alex picked me back up bridal style. "Have fun with her," Alex said as he gestured towards the other girl. He carried me over to the staircase and as soon as he started to carry me up the steps I struggled away form him. He just smirked and picked me up over his shoulder.

As he carried me up the staircase I screamed for help as loud as I could while I used all my strength to try to struggle away from him. By the time he got me inside a small bedroom I was crying again and begging him to let me go. He smiply ignored my pleas. He held one of my upper arms tightly as he forced my clothes off of me, and continued to hold that arm as he undressed as well. I knew that struggling while he was holding onto my arm would just hurt me more, but when he let go of my arm to put the condom on I had to do something.

I pushed him backwards and tried to run out the door but he almost immediatly caught me by my hair and pulled me back into the room. I saw the anger in his eyes as he slapped me across the face. "Never do that again! Your mine now!" he grumbled in a tone that made me start to tremble. He locked the door with a key and then stuck the key in the middle of the two mattresses so even if I struggled away from him again I wouldn't be able to get away easily. He finished putting the condom on and pushed me back onto the bed. He forced my legs open and positioned himself at my opening.

"Please Alex don't do this," I begged as I tried as hard as I could to quirm away from him but it was no use he was too strong for me.

He raped me for what seemed like forever. I kept trying to get him off of me but I could barely breathe through my tears. I felt so weak...so useless...so pathetic!

*Sorry I have been offline for so long. My internet is really shitty and I have to use my grandma's computer to post now.*


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Comments:

yay u posted yay i'm first to post oh yeah lol update soon

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

you posted yeah update soon plez:] this is really good

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

oh no. alex is mean! plz write more

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

At least at this point it wasn't a gang bang. Poor little girl down stairs:(

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

good good cant wait for more!
i love all your story's.
tillz

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanx

ah i hate alex!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

OH MY GOD! *counts* i've got 20 red flags here before the acctuall rape!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

omg i love this story and i cant wait for the next chapter!

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx

*eye twitches* I think Alex is going to be a very good freind of a certain creep who got killed by a girl in yellow with a sword...
Kill Bill=Axe Alex.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

DANGET! Can she meet another hot guy that helps her? pleeeease? lol.
Dang. Stupid jerk. lol.
Ok, i want to know what happens next!!

waiting...waiting.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Continueing soon


Grrr!! How deceitful!! I thought Alex was a good guy. That just gets me so irked. Hes comes off all nice and sweet kissing up to her parents and he turns out to be a jerk. I want to know what happens next so update asap.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

UPDATE!!!

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeps

seriously why don't girls pay attention to our red flag warnings! they are like those GIGAAAANNNTTTOOOOOR arrows with the flashing lights and the big bold words that say "STAY AWAY FROM HIM!" or "DON'T GO!" or "THAT'S A BAD PLACE TO GO TO!" ect! grrr so infuriating...

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Shit! Why don't you kill him already? haha. Anyways, I totally feel sorry for the girl downstairs. I think it would be so much easier for 'what's her name?' oh! right, Kasey, than the other one. coz humiliation is worse than physical pain in my opinion.

If you're alone with someone you feel lonely, desolate, and degraded.

But when you're surrounded by people who are cheering the rapist on, it's just...idk. Humiliating, and you can't just cry when he's done, coz then there's more of the freaking things!! From now on, they're known as 'its'!!!

You know in like the 1300s, after a couple got married, the men used to get their friends to watch as he took her to the marriage bed. It was both humiliating and degrading.

Bitch please, I would've thrown a vase at him, or something.

...kick him in the nuts.

Anyways, good job. kinda sad tho. whatevs. you set the mood.

Dannika,

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Fuck if i lived in the 1300's I would have kicked all their asses and then chopped their dicks off...but then again...i don't think woman were tought to fight back then...or tought to chop a guy's dick off...

TIME MACHINE

sara moon
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Wait till she goes home and tells her parents. If she's smart she won't say a word. She was raped!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Huh? Lol that comment lost me a bit

Haha. But then again, not all women are taught to fight now. You have the skill to do it, but women back then didn't always have the balls. :(

haha. I totally wish I lived in the 1300s! There's so much...history! But then again, it wouldn't be made yet. ahah. I wann alive in a castle. :)

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Fuck yes! I live in a fucking small ass town and there is a mansion type castle thing selling for a million dollars! Literally!

Damn how i wish i could buy it.

But then again next summer my parents are taking me and my sisters to Wisconsin cause they have like really old castles there that were built back up and they are using them as hotels now. I'm excited!

Awe, you're lucky! I'm gonna move to Scotland when I'm older and find me a man. haha. My aunt says that men aren't like they are in the romance novels (which is severely depressing), so I'm kinda worried. But if I do have a castle, I think I'd be happier. Lonely, but happy. :)

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Why go to scottland to find a man? Go to the mall, get a man at Hot Topic or something! Then move to whales. Cause there are a shit load of castles in whales.

yeah, but I've got a thing for scotland. haha. I think it's the accent - plus i'm part scottish - or I'd go to Ireland. Plus, i'm trying to learn Gaelic - and I really like the language.

Oh, and there's supposed to be Tuatha De Danann in the Irish forests. bahahahahaha. I'm so excited! :)

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha sweetness

*shakes head sadly*
" It's always got to be the cute boys..."
I hope that Alex gets shot or something...If he was in the hood, he'd like so-o-o get shot.

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha ya

Oh! My real name is Morgan, and I looked up the Sweep thing. I think I'll check it out, although I live in canada, so Idk if i'll be able to find it and what not. :) Anyways...thanks~

Dani (I like Dannika better than morgan...ahhaahaha.)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

NO words! Got no words! Just tears.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Sowy 4 makin you cry



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