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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

683,000 forcible rapes occur every year, which equals 56,916 per month, 1,871 per day, 78 per hour, and 1.3 per minute. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 6, 2008    Reads: 275    Comments: 19    Likes: 1   


Over the next week I avoided my friend's and my family as best as I could. I didn't feel like talking to any one although I'm sure they all knew something was wrong. Even though a week had passed I could still feel him on me. No matter how many showeres I took the feeling just wouldn't go away. I felt dirty, and used.

Then one day when I got to school my best friend Nate came up to me. He had some one with him, but I didn't want to look up to see who it was. "Hey Kasey," he said as he started to walk beside me.

"Hey," I whispered. I kept my eyes on the ground as we walked and counted the tiles as I stepped on them. I had been doing this a lot lately.

"This is Alex.  He is new here," Nate said as he grabbed my arm lightly and forced me to stop. I winced because I still had a bruise from Alex there. Then it hit me.

'No. It can't be the same Alex. It has to be some one else!' I thought to myself. I gathered all my courage and looked up to see that it was the same Alex that raped me. It took all my strength not to burst into tears. "I have to go Nate, I'll see you later." I managed to say before I took off running to the girls restrooom. Luckily, no one else was in there. I went into the first stall and puked into the toilet. 'Why is this happening to me? Why did he follow me? Why the hell can't he just leave me alone?' I thought to myself as I flushed the toilet. I leaned my back against the white brick wall and started to cry into my hands.

I heard the door the girl's restroom open and then Nate's voice saying,"Peek-a-boo! Kasey, are you in here?" He must have heard me crying because he walked in anyway. "Kasey what's wrong?" he asked as he wrapped me in a hug. At first I tried to pull away from him, but my attempts weren't strong enough for Nate. "Please tell me what's wrong Kasey."

I thought about what Alex said but in the end chose to tell Nate. "He raped me," I whispered into his chest.

I could feel his etire body tense out of anger. "Who did?" he asked through gritted teeth.

"Alex," I whispered.

*Sorry for the shortness I have half an hour left before I have to get off the computer I still gotta post my new novel up*


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Comments:

yay first post who cares about the shortness lol oh i hope nate helps her but i hope he does not get hurt hmmmmmm at least she told someone cant wait any longer ...i really hate alex he makes me mad

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Aw, I like Nate. I hate Alex...hate him with a burning passion...OMG don't make him kill Nate...I just got the idea that you may just do that...PLEEEEASEEEEEEEEEEE DONT! lol.


ADD MORE SOON!!!! please o:) that is supposed to have a halo...

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha k

whoa, hey...why is death one of the tabs...PLEASE DON'T KILL NATE I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!! no seriously please please please please please please!

just tell me now...are you going to?

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

You shall see in the upcoming chpaters

Um I don't know who I am more worried about Kasey or Nate!!! Please update soon!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

omG!!! write more plzzz

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do


Yeah I dont know who to worry about more either including her family. Alex is sooooo watching her I can feel it.... or maybe im just being paranoid... Nate is such a sweetheart hes mad about her rape. Update when you can :)
P.S. Cant wait to see the new novel :) :)

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe thanks

*takes a deep breath in and forgets to ex-hale* OMG! he followed her?!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha ya...

Yeah!!!! Deinately not for Kasey's cercumstances, but for the fact that you posted another. Keep me updated.

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

AHHH!!!!! i love it update soon plez

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

ya agree, i think Alex is a person that should just kinda die, i sure do hope Nate helps her.

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Just kinda? Lol

Puppydogz
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Wow I like this story and i hope that Alex gets his something cut off POST MOREW SOON

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

NO!
NO!
NO!
NO!
NO!
WHY!
why did you stop at the good part :(
whats going to happen, what is Nate going to do?
hurry and write more, fast please.

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha i shall certainly try my dear

holy crap!

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

What haha

Yay! I'm glad she told somebody - but I'm sure, Nate and his testosterone-filled body are gonna approach Alex and be like wtf man! and then he'll kill him and then her! dammit! argh!

Dannika,

ps. good job.

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Hurry!!!! You need to come out with the next one! I can't stand waiting. If you haven't noticed, I'm very impatient. I love this story! A+++++++

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

ADD MORE.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

sara moon
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keep it coming it's great!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

Well, at least Nate's got a good heart. Hope that he doesn't die though...

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

oh lord! I hope he don't kill her best friend

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Nate is safe...for now



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