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I Should Have Told

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


When a girl named Kasey is forced to accompany her family on vacation something goes horribly wrong...

683,000 forcible rapes occur every year, which equals 56,916 per month, 1,871 per day, 78 per hour, and 1.3 per minute. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 10, 2008    Reads: 510    Comments: 14    Likes: 1   


"The new kid?" Nate asked in disbelief.

All I could do was nod my head.

"I"m gonna kill him!" he stated angrily as he started to leave. I quickly grabbed his arm and made him stop.

"Nate you can't! He said if I told anybody he'd kill people I love. Then he said he'd kill me. Please don't let him know that you know Nate. Please!" I begged as I started to cry harder.

Again he embraced me. After a few minutes he whispered, "I won't do anything you don't want me to do Kasey. Do you want to talk about it?"

Just then the door opened. I froze, thinking that it might be Alex, but instead I saw my twin sister Melony standing there.

"What's wrong?" she asked when she saw me. Nate was my only friend that she actually got along with, so I wasn't surprised when she spoke to him.

I wasn't sure if I wanted her to know, but Nate told her anyway. He probably thought that since she was my twin I would be fine with her knowing. "Alex raped her," he said quietly, while still holding me tight to his body. I didn't mind. I felt safe with him.

"The guy that you meant at the cabin?" Melony asked in disbelief.

I nodded my head, as the tears started to flow a little harder. She was almost instantly by my side with her arm wrapped around me. I moved so that instead of hugging Nate I was hugging her.

"Isn't this cute!" I heard Alex say from the bathroom doorway.


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Comments:

OMFG!!!!!!!! he heard didnt he?? oh plez update soon plez i love it

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I will as soon as I can


OMG!!!!!!!!!! As soon as I read that last line I got wide eyed and said "OH ****!!!!!". Almost fell out the bed too. I seriously hoped he didnt hear what happened. Update soon :)

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Ooo falling out of bed is bad...especially if it's a bunk bed 0_0

F***! But now here is my question...does no one think it is weird when men walk into the women's bathroom???

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha in my old school they did it all the time...it's normal...sorta

sara moon
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I guess that made Alex happy. Keep it coming, it's great!

This is onething I fall short of is more plot!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

nooooo omg no no no update soon

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

will do

omg omg omfg please tell me he did not hear what they were talking about ...i love nate ... omg i cant think straight.....you write so good ....update soon u just left me hangin

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha sowy

oh shizz! UPDATE GIRL! pwwwweeeeeaaassseeee!?

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha sure

UH Oh! please update soon I'm anxious!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha tay

omg are you! (shocked)
dont even know what to say omg!
whats going to happen.
hurry and write more.
Ahhh!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

update soon.... n let me knw!!!!!!!!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do :)

Shit! That's definitely not good! haha. the plot thickens...

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

haha glad your enjoying

Oh snizzle... (sits up at last sentence).
" Run girl, run!"

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha

darnet all if you hurt nate i swear..rawr

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Did you know that rawr is dinasour for hello?

rawr is dinasour for hello? hahahaha.

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

It is :D



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