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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Apr 27, 2008    Reads: 3002    Comments: 26    Likes: 11   


We held hands as we walked home from the movie theater. When we reached his houseI stopped, not wanting the perfect night with the perfect guy to end. "I love you" Damon said as he kissed me lightly on the forehead.

"I love you too..."I said asI fell into his arms so he could hold me before he had to go.

"I love you more!" he said teasingly as he wrapped his arms around me.

"That's impossible!"I said quietly.

"Why?" he asked laughing a little bit.

"BecauseI love you more than air!" i said looking up into his eyes.

Suddenly my best friend Matt jumped on top of me, causing me to wake up from my repeating dream. He started to tickle torture me giggling a little as he did so. "Wake up sun shine!" he said through his laughter.

"Ugh!"I groaned asI lightly pushed him away. "I hate you...!"

"Awe...did I wake Miss Kandi from her dream?" he asked chuckling a little. "Come on! get out of bed! We have school today wether you like it or not!" He pulled the covers away from me and started to drag me out of my bed.

"I hate morning people..." I said groggily as I stood up and stretched out my arms above my head.

I should probably explain why two, straight, high-school students of the opposite gender were living together. See, my parents were very wealthy. They died in a car accident a couple months earlier and left everything to me since I was a senior in high school. That included our pent house. My best friend Matt came to live with me after that because his parents kicked him out of the house. He slept in my old bedroom whileI slept in my parent's old bedroom.

We started to get ready for another boring day of school. I decided to wear a tight short black dress, my black fishnet tights, and my black rocker boots. I straightened my long jet black and neon blue hair and parted it so it was covering half of my face. I put on some black eyeliner, black lipstick, and black nail polish. I finished off my onsomble by putting on my skull necklace that my father gave me the morning he died, and the promise ring that Damon gave me for our 1 year anneversery. I finished getting ready and waited for Matt by the front door.

Matt walked out of the bathroom and grabbed his back pack off of the couch. He walked towards me and yawned. "Awe what's wrong Mr. Morning Person? Didn't you get enough sleep last night?" I asked jokingly knowing fully that the night before he had only gotten an hour sleep because of a party that I had at my house.

"Oh hush!" he said chuckling a little bit. I smiled back and giggled a little bit. I grabbed my shoulder bag and keys and then opened the front door. Matt and I started our walk to the Nazi Death Camp some people call school. The whole way there we laughed and joked around.

When we got there I ran right up to my boyfriend Damon and gave him a long, passionate kiss. He was an emo version of Brad Pitt, you could say. He had chin length, stick straight black hair and wore just a little black eyeliner. He was 6'3", 180 lbs, and just a little muscular. He had snake bites, which only made him even more sexy. He was my dream guy, and not only because of his looks. He was smart, funny, sweet, and he didn't care what people though of him. He defended me, loved me for who I was, and was always there for me.

When the kiss ended he chuckled and said, "Good morning to you too!" I giggled a little bit and stared up into his piercing blue eyes.

School went by slowly as always. After school Damon came over to my house to watch a movie. We had ordered a pizza and just sat on on the couch cuddling during he movie.

After the movie I walked with Damon back to his small trailer in the trailer park. "Goodnight beautiful..." he said as he gave me a goodnight kiss.

"Does this night have to end?" I asked. He smiled sweetly and chuckled slightly.

"I love you..." he whispered

"I love you too..." I said as I fell into his arms so he could hold me one last time before I had to go.

"I love you more..." he said teasingly as he wrapped his arms around me.

"That's impossible!" I whispered.

"Why?" he asked laughing a little bit.

"Because I love you more than air!" I said quietly as I looked up into his eyes. My heart sped up as I realized that this was happening exactly like in the dream.

He got down on one knee and said, "Kandi...you are my everything! I never want to lose you!" He then took a little box out of his pocket and took out an opal ring. "Will you be my everything for forever?"

I was shocked! "Are you asking me to marry you?" I asked still a little astonished.

"You don't have to answer right away!" he said as he quickly stood up and put the ring on my finger. "You can think about it for a while...I'll wait for you!"

"I don't need to think about it..." I whispered. "I want to be your everything because you are mine!"

He picked me up and twirled me in the air. We were both laughing. He set me down and kissed me very passionatly. Just then his trashy mother opened the door and yelled, "Get your butt in here!" She looked at me and then scowled. It was no secret that she hated me. Nobody knew why though.

Damon looked at me and said, "I'll see you tomorrow." He gave me a quick kiss goodbye and ran up the stairs into his trailer. His mother slammed the door in my face. I didn't blame him for leaving. If you knew his parents you wouldn't either.

I smiled as I walked home. I was thinking about Damon and how we were now engaged.

I was almost home when I heard a vehicle pull up behind me. I heard somebody get out of the vehicle but I didn't think anything of it because I was so close to home and so concentrated on my thoughts.

Suddenly there was a hand over my mouth and another hand wrapped around my stomache pulling me backwards. This man pulled me through the back door of a van. Once we were inside he closed the doors and the driver pulled away from the curb and started to drive down the road like nothing happened.

The guy who pulled me into the van was soon on top of me. He put duct tape over my mouth, cuffed my hands together behind my back, and used padded restraints to bind my ankles together. No matter how hard I struggled he seemed to be more powerful than I was. "Don't hurt her! Master wants her unharmed!" the driver said after the man on top of me slapped me.

"I know, but this bitch won't stop struggling!" the one on top of me yelled. He continued attempting to bind me from moving too much. Once he was satisfied thatI wouldn't be able to get away he crawled into the passenger seat.

After about an hour of struggling against the restraints I was bound in I became very tired and, as much as I tried to resist it, sleep closed in over me.

When I awoke I was being carried into a cottage by one of the men. I was stillbound so I couldn't struggle to much. He carried me inside the cottage and then just dropped me on the floor.

When I hit the floor I whimpered in pain but it was muffled by the tape over my mouth. The other man just stepped over me as he entered the cottage. "Put her in the bedroom...Master will be arriving soon!" the man stepping over me ordered.

The man on the couch stood up and picked me up again. He threw me over his shoulders like a sack of potatoes. He carried me into the bedroom and threw me onto the bed. He put a blind fold over my eyes so I couldn't see anything. I heard him leave the room and layed there in silence trying to think of a way to escape my captors.


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Comments:

wow, this is so intense, it's SOOO good!!! It's amazing!!! i can't wait till you post more!! hehe!! :)

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :D

xopri24
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amazing so far! cant wait for the next post!

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

good thing is i read that entire thing on the-n!

SHAZZZIIZZ! lolz that sounds funny... tori say it out loud like five times roflcopter

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

No no no i added like 3 sentances to this post to make it more...booksie!

Whoa! So many emotions...great job! ^>^

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

oh wow. i loved it!

Posted: May 9, 2008

is the main character's name Tori or Kandi?
at one place when Damon proposes her, he says "Tori"

So far it's intense. I am going to complete this in one sitting....

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry, it's kandi. I was thinking about using Tori then i decided on Kandi. I must have accidently typed Tori.

This is interesting but I'm finding the back story really hard to believe. Maybe American law is different, but unless Kandi/ Tori was 18 she cannot inherit anything, nor can she legally own property. Someone would have to be her guardian. Maybe if the guardian, for some unknown reason, allowed Kandi/ Tori to live on her own, then it's possible.

It's an interesting story and I'm going to continue reading. ;)

Posted: May 11, 2008

I LOVE the story so far! It is amazing!
However, I do have some helpful critisizm for you if you are willing to listen.
The beginning seems to happen too quickly. You haven't really intruduced us to the characters and it seems more like you are just telling us the story rather than letting us see/ live it. You need to make us care more. For example, I understand that Kandi and Damon love each other profusely but the proposal seems too abrupt and feels as if it came out of left field.
Again I absolutly love the plot so far but I believe it could be even better with some fleshing out.
Right, now I HAVE to keep reading or I think I will go insane!
Good job!!!!!

Posted: May 12, 2008

Thats amazing I LOVE IT!

Posted: May 16, 2008

I love it it is soooo cool

Posted: May 17, 2008

I liked it ^^
I'm almost completely hooked. On to read the next chapter =)

~mandy

Posted: May 22, 2008

I loved it so far.
Sounds very promising.

Posted: May 25, 2008

WOW 5the story is so cool i wish there was more to read. if a completely finished copy ever got published i would buy it.

Posted: May 26, 2008

baha.
i'm glad i read it on the-n too.
:]

Posted: May 26, 2008

First of all, I love the idea! Sounds really interesting! but like Threwen Greenleaf said, everything happens too quickly. Put some more detail in and help us get into the mind of the character. All I know about her is her name. You get what I'm saying. otherwise its a really great novel and I cant wait to read the rest.

Posted: May 28, 2008

This was really good. I like it when she had that dream and then it actually happened to her. I really liked the part where damon asked Tori to marry him that was cute and passionate at the same time. Try and describe the cottage more though and maybe a little more about why matt got kicked out of his parents house. I also agree with Threwen Greenleaf that in the beginning it went too fast, and should let us read it as though we are actually there or living it. Also try and make the scene or scene's with the two kidnapper's more intense. But overall this is a really good story. Ok i'm off to read thr next chapter.

Posted: May 31, 2008

Pretty cool! Awesome!

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

I'M SO SORRY!!!! ALL THE BOOKSIE CREW COMMENTS BELONG TO ME!!!! I NEVER LOGGED OUT. SILLY ME.

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

It's otay lol

This was good. It moved a little fast in the beginning and I would like to know her age. Would make more sense if she was 18. A little more back story on the characters but I imagine more will come in the next chapter

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

your probz like well tired of hearin this now but its well good. I cant wait to read on. totaly luvin that theyre emo lol.
check out sum of my stuff if yew got sum spare time but hurry up writing thaa next chapter i cant wait.X
Sophie

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

hey this story is awesome. I love it so far :) keep up the good work :)

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much

Hm, sounds good so far...if I had more time I would read some more. I will have to read this some more.
It sounds really good!!!
Could you check out my stories and comment please? thanks.

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

DUDE that is so sad...she just got engaged. =( wat happens to Matt?? Poor Damien

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

So far so good. Another great story Tori. Great work. I love it so far!

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks

You always seem to makes the people look good. lol.
What are these guys? mindless zombies? "master this master that." lordy.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha zombies do not exist...but vampires do! :)

Ohmigosh. :) scary! This chapter was a lot longer than your usual chapter length. yay!

I'm excited for the next part.

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha



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