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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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Submitted: May 20, 2008    Reads: 638    Comments: 10    Likes: 3   


"I'm not really sure," I said as I looked around. "You can chose, I'm up for anything!"

"Well, you can ride the horses. You can also walk down near the pond if you want to," he said as he looked at me.

"I love horses, so is it OK if we ride?" I asked looking back at him.

"I'm not aloud on the horses but I would be happy to watch you ride miss," he said smiling at me. I nodded my head and started to walk into the stable, but then I heard a loud shreik coming from the other side of the barn. I started to walk towards where I had heard the shrieking. I saw a buckskin mare rearing and bucking while 3 men tried to grab a hold of her halter.

I ran up to them, and climbed over the fence of a small arena. "Stop!" I yelled as I tried to get the men to stop what they were doing. They started to say something in Italian, and gestured for me to leave the arena. I looked over to the man that had accompanied me outside. He immediatly understood that I had no idea what these men were saying to me.

"They said that it is too dangerous for you to be in there. That horse is wild and hasn't yet been trained. They want you to leave," he said coming closer to the arena fence.

"Tell them to give me the lead rope and I'll calm her down!" I said quicky.

He said something in Italian and the 3 men hesitantly left after handing me the lead rope. I slowly set the lead rope on the ground and sat cross-legged down on the sandy ground. The buckskin mare calmed down almost instantly and just stood there looking at me.


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Comments:

I ike it I like it I like it.
Is it clear that I like it???

Please update soon :)

Posted: May 21, 2008

born wench
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please up date i need to read more please.

Posted: May 21, 2008

update please

Posted: May 21, 2008

omg sooo short and..theres no more =(
please update soon
like um.....now ^^
it was really good

~mandy

Posted: May 22, 2008

love love love. i want more ^.^

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha on it's way

oh, that was...short. Make it a bit longer please...:-)

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sowy i'll try harder next time

this story is good! update soon OK?

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

I'll try my hardest lol

awww

Posted: May 23, 2008

good

Posted: May 26, 2008

niiiice

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you



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