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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 13, 2008    Reads: 527    Comments: 13    Likes: 4   


The next day at around 7 at night we were checking into our hotel room in America. I was so excited to be back! Jake's grand father had given me enough money to buy new clothes, and he gave Jake enough money to pay for everything he ever needed! Appearently his grand father was quite wealthy, although I never did find out what he did for a living.

When we got to our hotel room and closed the door Jake tackled me onto the bed. He sat on top of me with a smile on his face. I was scared for a second, but the fear left me as he said, "Let's go swimming!"

I giggled alittle bit and said, "OK OKĀ  let me get changed first!"

He sighed and jokingly said, "If I must!"

"Oh you really must, now get off of me please!" I said through my laughter. He chuckled and got off of me. I stood up and grabbed my bathing suite that I had bought earlier that evening. I changed in the bathroom and he changed in the main room.

Luckily, all the scars Master had givien me were barely visible. I walked back out to the main room where Jake was waiting patiently for me.

We raced to the elevator, laughing the entire way. When the elevator doors opened there was a man and a woman already in there. They were also dressed to go swimming. The man looked so stern, and the woman looked content except for the hint of fear I saw in her eyes. I saw the tattoo of a collar around her neck, and I became terrified. I turned away from them and kept my eyes lowered. I knew that both of my tattoos were visible with this bathing suite on. The man seemed un-interested in me, luckily. When the elevator doors open I walked out with out hesitation and Jake followed behind me. He jumped onto my back and laughed. I let a giggle escape my lips, but then looked up to see the man looking at us. He seemed a little confused. I immediatly lowered my eyes. Jake and I walked behind the man and this woman all the way to the hotel pool. They entered first and I took the opportunity to stop Jake.

"Jake that man..." I started to say, but he cut me off.

"I know...don't worry. I won't let him get near you. If he asks I'll just say that this trip is a reward for you, and that while we are here I am acting as your boyfriend not your Master!" he said seriously. At least he understood that he had to act more...straight, while we were here. Then he added, "Besides, if he tries anything...I'll just tickle torture him!" He winked at me and smiled. I giggled a little bit. He opened the door to the pool area for me and we entered.


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Comments:

uh ohh... maby that guy knows her Master... O.o that'd be scawy...

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

OMFG!!! i love it no love cant even discrib on how i feel about this novel:] update soon plez

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe thank you so much!

OMFG!!! Update!!
keep me posted =DDD!!

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol will do

Oh NO! Not the tickle torture!!! lol.

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol yes the tickle torture

This is a very awesome story that you have going. Please put up the next chapter as soon as you can!

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you muches and I will

LOVE TI

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

great chapter

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

I just read all 17 chapters and I must say, I love your novel. I started to write something like it but stopped because I thought I was to young to write about something like this. I love your story once again and I hope you will update it soon please ;P

That guy is a purvert.

Ohh check out some of my writing. I started a novel about something I think is cool. read and tell me watcha think okay?

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Sweetheart unless your like 10 you are not too young to write about something like this...your not 10 are you?

hey, i love ur story ^^~ continue plsplspls... dyin to continue readin it ^^~ Thx.. ^^~

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe I sure will! :D

no I'm not 10 but I am 13. If I showed my Mom, she would freak and ask me questions. I don't like it wen she asks me questions. My sister is 10 and reading this and she likes it. shes only on chapter 12 tho...she started reading after me and it took her 2 hrs to read up until then. I was done in like 20 min. but I love to read and read every chance I get.


Right now I am read ing a book called Clan of the Cave Bears and it is great.

How old are you?

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm 16...your 10 year old sister is reading this...and she understands what it's about...ignorance is bliss in my family I guess cause my 14 year old sister is still clueless on anything revolving around sex

Ahhhh!

I effin love this novel!

It's the first one I read on this website.

lol. it's really good!

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe thank you so much!

I really like this one...

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

that good

I love how Kandi's life is getting better. Plz plz don't cange it!!!

Posted: Nov 11, 2008



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