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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Apr 28, 2008    Reads: 1454    Comments: 14    Likes: 8   


Although it felt likes hours it had to have only of been about 10 minutes before Master showed up. The bedroom door opened without warning and then it closed. I felt the presence of all three men in the room. "What do you think Master?" one of the men said.

"I am very pleased Bobby. You and Jason did well. Please wait out in the living room so I can get to know this beauty a little better. I'll call you when your needed!" Master said sternly. I heard the door open again, and I heard it close. He grabbed my ankles and dragged me forward on the bed. He made me sit on the edge of the bed and sternly said, "Stay!"

'Stay?' I thought to myself angrily. 'What the fuck does he think I am? A dog?'

I felt my feet be unbound, and I felt my hands be freed from their binds as well. I mentally prepared myself to make a run for the door as soon as I could see and talk again. I felt him take the tape off of my mouth. Slowly, he took the blindfold off. He turned around to pick something up off of the dresser behind him. I quickly stood and ran for the door but I didn't even get two feet before I felt his hand wrap around my arm and pull me back to him. He chuckled and said, "Come here little one, I'm not done with you yet!" I continued trying to struggle away. "Calm down my pet or else you'll feel the sting of my whip across your back!" Hearing him say that made me stop struggling completely, although I did feel like crying. He chuckled a little bit and said, "That's a good girl...tell you what...how about I just ask questions for now." It was more a command than a question, but it was better than anything else he had been planning on doing. He made me sit back down on the bed. He pulled a wooden chair over and set it in front of me. He sat down on it and said, "What's your name?"

"Kandi" I whispered in fear looking at him for the first time. If I had to guess I would say he was about 6'2" or 6'3". He was pretty skinny but also pretty muscular so I would assume he weighed about 200lbs. He had chocolate brown eyes, and Italian looking skin. I have to admit that he was hansome. He seemed displeased when I looked into his eyes.

"From now on you will be known as Kitten. How old are you Kitten?" he asked as he stood up from the chair and walked back over to the dresser with his back towards me. I thought about running again but I didn't.

"I just turned 18 3 months ago" I answered.

"Do you still live with your parents?" he asked turning back around to face me.

I took in a shakey breath and said, "They're dead..." He gave a look telling me to explain how they died and so I continued. "They got into a car accident nearly 2 months ago..."

"I'm sorry to hear that Kitten. Where do you live now?" he asked

"My parents were very wealthy. They left me our old pent house and basically everything we owned in their will. So when they died my best friend Matt moved in to live with me..." I said.

He cut me off by asking, "Is Matt gay?"

"No" I said as I shook my head no.

"How many times a week do you fuck him?" he asked. He sounded almost jealous.

"Excuse me?" I said getting offended. I continued to show my rebellious side by saying, "I'm engaged! I would never cheat on my fiance like that!"

"Your engaged?" he asked now sounding almost angry. I nodded my head and held up my hand showing off my ring finger.

He grabbed my hand and took the ring off of it angrily. "Not anymore!" he yelled. I reached out trying to get the ring back.

"Please give it back to me!" I pleaded as I scratched at his hand trying to get it back. He back handed me across the face and let me fall to the floor in pain.

"Silence Kitten!" he yelled. I layed on the ground crying. I knew that he was never going to let me go home to Damon. My heart shattered into a million pieces at the thought of never seeing Damon again. There were a few moments of silence and then he bent down and pulled me up to my feet by my upper arms. He again made me sit down on the edge of the bed. He gently wiped the tears from my face. "How many times have you had sex?"

I froze in fear of his reaction and then whispered, "None..."

"Your a virgin?" he asked in disbelief. I nodded my head hesitantly.

After a few more questions he opened the door and told Bobby and Jason to come back inside.


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Comments:

WTF KIND OF PERVE IS THIS DUMBASS!? ZOMG! :..(

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

Author Comment:

It gets better Kara...by better i mean he gets more perverted

argh. Z0MG what a fckn prick! asl;dkfj;askljdfkl;sdf off to read more.

Posted: May 9, 2008

poor girl....

this chapter is so heart wrenching

loving the flow of the story

Posted: May 9, 2008

MUCH better!
The only thing I could find to comment on in this chapter was in the second paragraph "your" should be "you are."
I still LOVE it!

Posted: May 12, 2008

wow so sad
i realy do like it :)

Posted: May 17, 2008

aww, soo sad! i will read some more later!

Posted: May 19, 2008

omg..thats so sad. it brought tears to my eyes, i was thinking about being through that. never seeing MY baby again...=(
thats so sad.
on to read more
~mandy

Posted: May 22, 2008

O_O I love it!

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe thank you

wow.I art stunned into speechlessness by your awesome story (what a f***in perv!)

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

This story is really well written! ^-^ Bobby, heh...that was an unexpected name.

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

O_O That was awful. Bad things are always happening to the women in your stories. How come bad things never happen to the men? You always make the women weak and the men strong.... why?

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Because men suck

OK, but why not let the heroine in your story be the strong one then? And let the man be weak just to show how much they suck. I love your writing, truly, but it bothers me that you portray women as weak and helpless. I personally am not one of those women. I can take down a man more than three times my size, and I wouldn't hesitate to do it if a man even tried to treat me the way the men do in your stories. I just really think that it's kind of degrading and insulting to the woman in the world who actually have a back bone and can stand up to men. Besides, maybe writing about a strong woman will be more fun. You should try it. It might be fun.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

This is just how I write
I know there are a lot of woman out there in the world that are strong
But I'm not naive enough to think that there aren't woman out there who are weak

Awww thats so sad. yet oh so addicting

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Argh! He gets MORE perverted??????? Wahhahahahahaha. I really hope he's not a vampire - coz if he was, that would suck. Vampires rock (and are seductive) - not just perverted. Idk, kinda like an incubus. type of thing, cept you don't die. haha.

Anyways, I like this story. :)

Dani,

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks



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