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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 488    Comments: 20    Likes: 6   


With out struggling I let him bring me up to my room. He set me down gently in the bathtub, which was filled with warm water. It felt so good I just wanted to fall asleep in it. He sat down on the edge of the tub, and stared at me. I was too weak to care. Part of me wanted to glare at him even though I knew it would piss him off. I hated him! He killed Matt, and he killed Damon! He took me away from my home! He took me away from my almost happy life.

As if reading my mind he said, “Do you know how you break a horse’s spirit?  You isolate it. You take away its herd. You take away its freedom. You become its only friend, and sooner or later the horse will do whatever it takes to stay your friend!”

I used all my strength to whisper, “If you break a horse your forcing it do something it doesn’t want to. If you train a horse you’re asking it to trust you and to obey you. The horse will respond better by being trained! I however am not a horse. I am a human being. You can’t break me, and you can’t train me! No matter how much you try!” By the time I finished my sentence I was glaring at him.

I expected him to slap me, but instead he just smirked. He grabbed my chin forcefully and said, “I can do whatever I want Kitten. I will break you, and you will learn to obey because I am your only friend Kitten!”

I continued to glare up into his eyes. “Your not my friend!”  I said coldly.

Again he smirked, and then said, “In time I will be, but for now I am your master! You took a nice vacation, but your back now and you better behave like a slave. You don’t want to spend another 3 days in that room do you?”

“It would be better than spending the next 3 days out here with you!” I said angrily. I couldn’t hold myself back anymore. I didn’t care about the consequences, but I refused to give him the satisfaction of me obeying him.

He was about to slap me, but one of his servants walked in. “Sir, your needed at the office!” he said in an urgent tone.

Master stood up, obviously disappointed that he couldn’t punish me right away. I just smiled victoriously at him. Then he smiled back at me. “Chain her up in my room and make sure she can’t get away!” Master said, still smiling at me. His servant left, and came back moments later with two other men. Master left to go to the office, and left me alone with these 3 men.

I knew that I was too weak to fight off the 3 men that stood before me so I let them pick me up out of the water. Two of the men held me tightly by my arms and forced me to walk through the mansion to Master’s bedroom.

The same two men held me tightly as the other one found everything that they would need to keep me from getting away.

They forced me to my knees and chained my hands above my head to a chain hanging from the ceiling. They put a blindfold over my eyes, and a gag in my mouth. They even put earplugs in my ears. They took away all my senses, and left me feeling helpless.

I stayed like that for hours. I had no idea if I was alone in the room, or when Master would be getting back. The position I was in was causing so much pain that I wished I could just fall asleep. 

Without warning I felt somebody push 3 fingers into my ass. I screamed into the gag out of pain and surprise. I tried to struggle away but whoever this was, held me tight against his naked body. I could feel his hard cock pressing against my back. He pushed his fingers in and out of me several times and then pulled them out. By this time I was in tears. It was already hard for me to breathe so I tried to stop crying as much as I could. Then he pushed his entire cock into me harshly as he bit into my shoulder from behind. I screamed into the gag out of agony, but was in too much pain to struggle. He pumped into me a few times, and then stopped. With his cock still inside my ass he took the earplugs out. “Do you want this pain to continue?” he asked in a cocky tone. I could tell by his voice it was Master. I shook my head no instantly. “Will you do as you are told from now on?” I paused to think about it.  I didn’t want to let him break me that easily, but I wanted the pain to stop so badly! I guess he didn’t like the pause I took, because he started to pump himself harshly in and out of me again. I instantly started to nod my head yes, hoping that would get him to stop. He stopped after a couple more seconds. “Will you do as you are told from now on?” The tone in his voice was harsher now. I nodded my head frantically yes. “Will you ever try to run from me again?” I shook my head no. “I just broke you Kitten!” I could hear the satisfaction in his voice. That one statement made me feel completely empty inside.

He unchained my hands and held me close to him so I wouldn’t fall to the ground. Slowly pulled his cock out of my ass. He gently took the gag and blindfold off of me. It took a few moments for my eyes to adjust to the light, and for the muscles in my mouth to stop hurting. He stood up, and picked me up bridal style. He carried me over to his bed and set me down gently. “Show me what a good girl you can be, and ride me!” he whispered into my ear. I closed my eyes tightly as another tear streamed down my face. I nodded my head slowly.


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Comments:

omg!x!..
.. i hate him!x!..
up until now.. i've been harbouring some faint hope that he might turn out to be a human being.. but now... >:[

your doing a great job tor..
loved her little speech not breaking her spirit!x!..

nd.. ooh yeah!!.. irock!!..
first comment!!..
xoxoxoxoxox

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Oh maan.. That guy is a total asshole :(
Kill him.. :@

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

i hate that man he makes me sick *making gagging nose* i like it though update as soon as you can plez

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

dame nice....
make the master a enuch[duno how tospell, jus cut off his penis] n make him go broke...
dun make him die tou. he deserve to suffer!!!!!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

WRITE MORE

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure thing

He is such a creap. I hope Jake uses his brains and finds her.

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

I hope so too!...Hey just cause i'm the writer doesn't mean I know what's gonna happen!

aughh that freak. >.< Please write more and make him die. XP

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol

*cries in corner*
kill him

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

But then the story would end

Your a beautiful artist much more a beautiful writer.... I very much enjoyed reading this

I agree with the other women I'd just kill him but then all that hype builds for next chapter huh ?? hahah

good job ohh ohh and if you would I'd love for you to check out my poetry I no you write novels but just check it out and leave me comments of your honest opinion !!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

I write some poetry too...I have 2 on my profile...so ya if I remember(Which I hopefully will) I'll check out your poetry

UGH i hate him so much i wish she couold make him suffer ........
update soon it is really good

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks and will do

the-n's story reader
(not registered user)

OMG she better choke him with his belt and be like let me and the other slaves go u BITCH ASS RAPIST /or Petiphile
i don't think i spelled that right well a child rapist and TORI how old is master

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Early 40s

the-n's story reader
(not registered user)

if he's early 40's and she's like 16 or 17 he's a pediphile

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

...I'M PISSED! your great at writing you always have been my bestie but ugh i'm so pissed!!! grrr hope he has to suffer a million times worse than she ever had to!!!

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

He will :)

@the-n's story reader:

i guess the word youre trying to find is paedophile.......

I know you are not gonna kill the master soon....
i guess i'll ahve to do it myself!!

*Finds a machete........on the lookout for the monster=master!!*

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh trust me Kritika you don't want to kill Master yet...not till you see what I put him through!

when are you goin to post more?

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Later tonight probably

please write more. i love this story :]

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Im taking you on the promise T-kitten! you'd better make him pay or i'll sick Alexander (from Vampire Kisses) On 'im! like he was trying to hurt Raven (also from Vk!)

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

I know who Alexander and Raven are

KILL THE GOD DARN ASS HOLE HE DISURVES IT IF I WAS HER ID GO IN TO THE KITCHEN WHILE THE MASTER WAS GONE GET A BUTCHER KNIVE AND WHEN WE WERE ALONE I WOULD STAB THE CRAP OUT OF HIM

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

ooohhh heyyy you said something bout putting him through sumthin bad..hmmm i'm likeing

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha i'm sure you are

He broke her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That easily?!!! That guy has to die! I HATE him!! I don't use that word very often ,but I seriously hate him!

Posted: Sep 3, 2008



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