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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27

Submitted: Jul 2, 2008    Reads: 440    Comments: 12    Likes: 0   


I opened my eyes and looked at him. He smirked and then stood up. He dragged me to my feet and then put me over his shoulder. I wanted to beg him to let me stay, because I knew very well that he was right. I had seen what some of the other Master's had done to their slaves for being disobediant. By the time I had figured out what I wanted to say we were in the dungeon, where he had a holding cell. He set me down on my feet inside the cell and was about to walk out, but I whispered, "Master,"

He stopped but didn't turn around to face me. "What is it Kitten?" he asked. His voice was irritated, and I wasn't sure if I should even bother asking to stay in the safety of his home.

"I want to stay with you Master," I stated in a weak tone. He walked out of the cell without saying another word. After locking the cell door he left me alone in the dungeon.

I looked around my small cell and saw a cot sitting in the corner. I made my way slowly over to it and sat down.

After a while I became tired and fell into a dreamless sleep on the cot.

I woke up to voices outside my cell. One was Master's and the other was from a man that I didn't recognize. I kept my eyes closed, and pretended to be asleep while I listened in on their conversation.

"Is she obediant?" the strange man asked.

"Not in the least. She is quite the challenge!" Master said almost sounding angry as he said it.

"Hmmm...how old is she?"

"She will be 19 in a month," Master replied.

"Has she bore any children?"

"No,"

"Has she ever been pregnant?"

"Not that I know of,"

"Hmm...well, she certainly is a beauty!"

"Yes...yes she is!" Master replied. He sounded almost sad as he spoke.

"How much are you asking for her?"

"$5,000"

"...I'll take her," this strange man said in a tone that told me he wished he didn't have to pay that much for me but he still wanted me.


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Comments:

Wow, I didn't even realize it was you who wrote this! I had read this story earlier before I had even started writing mine and I loved it! It's really an honor to have someone as skilled as you like my writing so much!

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Your equally as skilled as I am

*Keeping my fingers crossed it is the grandfather:)*

A girl can wish. You keep us in suspense:)

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm good at keeping people in suspense

write more!!

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

please write more soon!
i cant wait to find out what happens next :]

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Me either ;)

ohh wow! Good job I LOVE it! Write more soonn.... please?=]

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

omg i hope this guy is better ..not that im saying she should even be there but i can hope for her
i love it ...but hate the idea lol. update soon i cant stop readin it

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha will do

i hope he isn' a flusing a-whole like "Master" is... is his name Joe? LOL idk why i want a name for him but i do...

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Do you know how addictive your stories are? :P

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm going to guess very?

actually.. [nd no 1 kill me 4 dis pleez..].. I dnt want it to be jake hu buys her cs dat'll mean thiis story will end!x!..
=[... but then again.. she'd b so happy....

fxckin hell tori!!..
ur makin me argue wiv miiself over a fictional character!!!!!!...

oooh.. nd cn yooh take a look at som of mii other novels!!..
pleeez nd tnkoo..

xoxoxoxox

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol i'm sorry deary

OMG! Please update, I want to find out what happened! Your stories are SO addicting I cant wait. (Hint #5: Wait a long time, then go back to your favorite book, and read the other chapters. That way, you are less like OMG WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN! (unless it is this story))

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol thank you very much and if all goes as planned I should have another chapter later tonight and at the very latest tomorrow afternoon

YAY! *feels like she's getting ignored* *sigh* *startes at the screen for two hours hoping for ch 23*

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha just got posted deary

AGAIN I WRITE PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSEEEEEEE LET IT BE JAKES GRANDFATHER

Posted: Jul 8, 2008



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