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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 8, 2008    Reads: 808    Comments: 15    Likes: 4   


When I woke up I was laying on a small bed in a cold damp room. My entire body ached, and even breathing hurt. My new master was standing in the corner waiting for me to wake up.

"Good morning pet," he said as he walked over to me. "I know your hurting right now, and the pain will eventually subside. Do you have any questions you want to ask me? If so this is the time to do it. You may ask me anything and speak freely for the next half hour."

He helped me sit up, even though it just made the pain worse. Then he sat down next to me on the small bed. He waited patiently as I thought of something to ask.

"What's your name?" I asked in a quiet and unsure tone.

"Rafiel, but you must call me Master at all times." he said in a stern tone.

I nodded my head showing that I understood.

"What did your old master call you?" he asked.

"Kitten," I said quietly.

"Hmm...I like that...that is what you are to answer to from now on. Undestand?" he asked in that tone that sounded so cold.

"Yes Master," I said quietly. I sat there thinking of my next question for a few moments. "How old are you?"

"27," he answered.

I was glad that he was younger than my old master.

We cotinued talking like this for about 45 minutes, and then he realized what time it was. He stood up and left, telling me that he would come back when it was time for dinner.

I learned a lot during that conversation. I learned that if I behaved well I would earn things, like a nicer room, and a pet. Ofcourse I double checked that he meant an animal pet and not a human pet. He also told me that if I behaved very well for 10 years, he would let me go home, unless at that point in time I found that I enjoyed it there and wanted to stay. Ofcourse I didn't want to stay there for 10 years, but it was better then having to stay there for forever.

I layed back down on my bed and fell into a light sleep. I was very tired still.


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Comments:

first comment! YAY. plz updt ( that is short for please update since I say it so oftern on your stories)

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

EVEN THOUGH U DIDNT GIVE HER ANY SLACK I STILL HOPE YOULL WRITE MORE SOON CAUSE NOW IM ADDICTED

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol will do

it keeps getting better and better cant wait to read more

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe thanks

Plz write more

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

AHHHH!!! i hope she will be able to last ten years so she can go home. I love it :} update soon plez

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do :)

ohh wow. he has some sense of emotion... well a little-ish. Good job! Update! =]

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

well i am glad that he is younger and he seems ....worse but better than her last master
update soon it is realy good

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

OK I shall

i like this master more even if he can be meaner he seems more....wats the words.....LESS OF A DUSHBAG and more giving

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol well I'm glad to hear not everybody hates him

Dear God! What are you thinking stopping there?! I will riot! Or, sense I don't know where you are, I shall cyber riot! Please continue!

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol I shall I shall

INUS FAV FRIEND
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omg (begging) uptate!!!!!! i agree with xxxNightxxx Walkerxxx updat or ill jion the riot!!!!!!!!

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

I think I will like this master better. But what is there to go home to????

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

a the-n user
(not registered user)

Wait how old is her old master?

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

He was in his 40s

well atleast he's sort of nice...

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeps

Don't tell me she's staying for 10 years

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I won't haha

mandy nickname
(not registered user)

i take that back. maybe he's not too bad.

Posted: Sep 19, 2008



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