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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 11, 2008    Reads: 864    Comments: 16    Likes: 1   


"You can sit on the bed if you want to," I said as I sat down on my bed. The servent was still standing in the corner staring at me intently.

"Shut up you stupid whore!" he said coldly. I was taken back by this. In my old master's house I was in charge of the other servents as much as he was, although I never excercised my power. They would always talk to me with respect. "I don't know what went onwith your past masters butin this house you are nothing! You must do what the rest of us ask you to, and you can not protest...unless of course you wish to be punished."

"I'm sorry Sir," I whispered with my head down. "I didn't know..."

"That's because your a stupid fucking slut! Everybody hates you! You have no one!" he yelled as he walked closer to me. I had no idea why he was being so cruel to me. When he finally reached me he slapped me across my face.

"Nathaniel!" I heard Master'svoice boom from the doorway as I whimpered in pain. Nathaniel turned aroundto face Master. The expression on his face changed from one of hate and anger to one of fear and respect.

"Yes Sir?" he asked innocently.

"What are you doing?" Master asked sternly as he walked closer to us.

"I was just tellig her how things worked around here Sir," Nathaniel answered with his eyes lowered.

"Well that little demonstration just got you 5 whips," Master said angrily. He then called for a man named Danny, who I assumed would be the one to punish Nathaniel. I saw the pain in Nathaniel's eyes.

"Master," I whispered with a little fear of being slapped again.

"What is it Kitten?" he asked as he walked closer to me.

"Is punishing him really nescessary? It didn't hurt that bad...honest!" I said pleadingly. Just because Nathaniel was being evil to me didn't mean that I wanted him to go through that pain.

Master chuckled a little bit and then said, "If he doesn't take his punishment then you will recieve it. Are you sure that's what you want?"

"No Master,"I said quietly as a tall, buff man walked into the room.

Master turned to this man and then said, "Hello Danny, please take Nathaniel to the dungeon and give him 5 hard whips. Then carry him to his room and give him a sedative."

Nathaniel followed Danny out of my bedroom, but I could see he was on the virge of tears. This truly scared me. I had recieved up to 50 lashes at a time and had been able to hold back my tears untill about 20. If a strong man like Nathaniel was almost crying about thinking abot recieving five...it couldn't be good.

*GUESS WHAT EVERYBODY??? I'M HOLDING MY NOVEL HOSTAGE! ONCE MY BEST FRIEND'S NOVEL Second Chances, All Too Rare WRITTEN BY XxDarkArts17xX GETS 10 POSSITIVE COMMENTS I WILL POST 1 VERY LONG CHAPTER. UNTILL THEN YOU WILL JUST HAVE TO WAIT IN THE SUSPENSE OF WANTING TO KNOW WHAT MASTER DOES TO KANDI THE FIRST NIGHT SHE IS WITH HIM...*


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Comments:

HOLY SHIZNIT

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

she was brave ...imsorry i would not stick up for someone who called me a whore and a slut and then slapped me...not that he deserved to be whipped but i am just saying...ugh see i am rambiling on ..it was really good keep it up

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

when will the novel by ur riend be rady/? im oin to go MAD w8-in!!

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

It's posted on here and has been for a few days...I just want people to comment it because it's amazingly awesome and addictive!

hmmm... ok.. wel yooh r jus plain evil!!...
xlolx..

but.. ii wil post all 10 comments miiself if necessary ..
xlolx..

oh yeah... LOVE d chapter.. i like the twist.. it's nice to digress evry once in a while..
=D...

um.. re: the wedding... yes of cors it cn be halloween tori..
i will wear a lime green & pink & black tutu..
=D...

xox

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Mmkay well it's illegal in this twisted game for you to write all 10 comments...sowy

And you may wear the tutu but I call wearing tight blue jeans with holes in the knees, a black mini mini skirt, a tight black t-shirt with a purple fairy on it, a black and white checkered wrist band for each wrist, my pentacle ring, a guitar pick necklace, black socks, and black sneakers that say 'I heart Jack'...Jack from nightmare before Christmas.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH how can I go that long without this book! HELP! I love it by the way

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

uhhhh ok cool still a great story

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

NOOOOOOOO you cant hold it hostage:[ i love it update soon.....well when it is not being held hostage.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Please end the torture! I must read more!!!!!!!!!! WEll anyway I love the chapter!!!

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Tori, I think you are a great writer, but you are a witch for holding us hostage!

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

No, I'm a witch because that's my religion

XD cool. i never heard of her or her novel. :3 i love new things to read. thanks for telling us about it ^^-

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Your very welcome!

Okay. I read and made honest comments and plan to continue. There are over 10 positive comments by 8 different people, including yourself. Your butt needs to get to writing! *wagging finger*

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

I was busy today and this is the first i was able to get online i'll be posting soon

wow. write more... *goes to read your friends novel.*

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

I can't find it !!!!!!!!

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

That's the way to go!
Strike while the iron's hot!
I like her story!

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

12 different people in cluding yourself and more than one comment from some!! let the chapter go.!!! PLEASE!!!

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

ooo putting us in suspense...mean lol

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha yes i'm mean i know lol



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