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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Apr 28, 2008    Reads: 1408    Comments: 13    Likes: 6   


"Take Kitten and get her cleaned up in a shower. After wards let her put her dress back on but nothing else. Then bring her out to me. I'll be in the living room...try no to take too long!" Master said as he picked me up by my uppers arms and pushed me into Bobby's grasps.

"Yes sir!" Bobby said as he started to lead me towards the bathroom.

"Wait...before you bring her back out to me...tell her the rules of being my slave. She hasn't learned them yet and she will need to know them before I can bring her back to the mansion unless she wants a more severe punishmet" Master said. I got the feeling he was directing the last part towards me. Telling me that I had better behave and do as I was told.

"Yes sir!" Jason said as he follwed behind us. Bobby and Jason led me to the bathroom and while Jason started the water Bobby stripped me of all of my clothing. I used my hands to cover myself as much as possible from their view. "Bobby go ask him if he wants us to shave her too..." Bobby pushed me towards Jason, who caught me quickly in his grasps so I couldn't run. "Is it warm enough?" He took my hand gently and guided it underneath the water. I nodded my head quietly. Something Master said to Bobby and Jason was still in my mind. Was I really going to be his slave? By the way he treated me I knew that if it was true I wouldn't be a nomal slave that performed simple tasks such as cleaning his house. I would be his pleasure slave. "Is it too warm?" Jason asked interrupting my thoughts. I shook my head no.

Bobby opened the door and said, "He said that he'll take care of it later but can you do this without me cause my girl Tay is calling..."

"Ya sure go ahead! Kitten here won't be any trouble for me!" he said laughing a little. Bobby shut the bathroom door and then went to talk on his phone. Jason motioned for me to step into the shower and I obeyed. He turned around and gave me a little privacy as I washed myself. When I was done and clean Jason wrapped me up in a towel and helped me dry off. After he got me dressed and I brushed through my hair he started to explain the rules to me. "Kitten is your new name. Your life before now is non existant. Now Master is your life. When you are at home with him you will more than likely be on a collar and leash. When you are out in public you will be wearing a different type of collar. It's a tattoo of a collar that goes around your neck. On your back will be a tattoo of Master's name and phone number. Any master in any country will know what the tattoo of a collar means. If you try to run away and another master sees it and starts wondering where your master is, your going to be in trouble. They will be rewarded for bringing you home, and there is no reason for them not to bring you home. Do you understand so far?" I nodded my head quietly listening, while I tried to comprehend what was happening to me. "Master has the right to do whatever he wants with you. If you rebel against what he wants you wil be punished. When you are around him you are not aloud to speak unless he gives you permission. You are never to look at his face, and definatly never to make eye contact with him. So keep your head lowered as much as possible. You are to adress him as Master or Sir. If he asks you to sit with him sit at his feet, unless you are out in public and then sit at the appropraite seating spot. Just do what you are told and you should be fine..." Jason explained. "Now come on let's get you out there before he gets impatient!" He took my wrist gently and tugged me along behind him out of the bathroom.


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Comments:

fuck he's gonna tattoo a collar around her fucking neck and he name and number on her freaking back?! WTF! good way to keep the slaves though... shit i'm definatly NOT gonna like this story huh?

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

Author Comment:

No Kara...your not going to like

shazzizz! man tori why'd ya have to ruin it :(

Posted: Apr 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Cause i'm special that way

gah. what a bitch.

Posted: May 9, 2008

i am hoing for a happy ending. Let me go to next chapter

Posted: May 9, 2008

See? I told you I'd keep reading. I'm still interested, but I also feel that I should make random comments along the way. Firstly, always spell check before you post. I've noticed some spelling errors.

The only thing is that the chapters are extremely short, which stops quickly.

Anyway, I will continue writing. I'm sure I'll comment again :P

Posted: May 11, 2008

Now there is a creative twist! A collar tatoo?!?!!

Posted: May 12, 2008

very weird, I like most of it but....

:)

Posted: May 17, 2008

>.< i hate them. why cant they just leave her alone and let her go on with her life. jeez ~rolls eyes~
onto the next chapter
~mandy

Posted: May 22, 2008

your charecter in this story is so different from your charectors in your other stories

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

How is that?

GAh!!!! I need more!

Posted: May 28, 2008

I agree with Greenleaf, very creative!
Tay, nice name!!!!
KR

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

hmm...a collar around her neck. WHAT THE HELL IS THAT ALL ABOUT???!!! lol.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

hahahaha. That's so embarassing!!! omg, i would die of humiliation. hahahaha. ...sick. :)

Anyways, he IS a vampire isn't he!!! oh, well, i guess i'll deal with it. :(

Good job tho!

Dani,

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm lost



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