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Kidnapped...

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


This is a story about a girl named Kandi who has found true love, and then she loses it all when she is kidnapped and forced to be a pleasure slave to a man she has never met. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27

Submitted: May 8, 2008    Reads: 818    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


He took me back to my bedroom and told me to get changed into the dress that was laying on the bed. After he took the leash off of me, he sat down on a chair in the corner of the room and stared at me. I figured that he wasn't going to give me any privacy so I quietly changed into the tight, short, low-cut, red dress that he had layed on the bed for me. "You look gorgeous Kitten!" Master said as he stood up and walked over to me. He gently placed his hand under my chin and tilted my head up. He kissed my lips gently. He attatched the leash back onto my collar. "I have my best friend here for dinner. You are to keep your eyes lowered and address him as Sir. You may speak freely untill he leaves, but you must be respectful at all times. Allow him to touch you if he wishes to and don't try to squirm away. If your behavior displeases me tonight the punishment will be severe! Do you understand?"

I nodded my head and kept staring at the floor. He smiled and kissed me once more before leading me out of the room. He led me down to the dining hall, where his friend was sitting waiting for us. His friend smiled at me and then shoke hands with Master. He took my leash out of Master's hands and pulled me closer to him.

"What's your name?" he asked me as pet my face gently.

"Kitten," I managed to whisper through my fear as I tried to avoid his eyes.

He chuckled a little bit and said, "No...what's your REAL name?"

I hesitated before whispering, "Kandi!"

He smiled and said, "Your a very beautiful girl Kandi..." He leaned in and kissed me gently on the lips. I wondered why Master would allow another man to kiss me. He ended the kiss and then smiled at Master. Master sat down at his place at the end of the table and gestured for me to sit in the chair to the right of him. Master's friend sat in the chair to the left of him. When I took my seat Master took the leash off of me.


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the-n's story reader
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wats with all the short postes

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sorry I have been having a lot of trouble concentrating recently. I'll try to make them longer.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG UPDATE PLEASEEE PRETTY PRETTY PLEASEEEEE

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol I will...patience is a virtue...not a very good virtue, but a virtue none the less!

one more A** came ...OMG

Posted: May 9, 2008

the-n reader... ellastar13
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iluv stories like this... post more

Posted: May 10, 2008

wow..this is..wow..
i cant believe them.
god this is so horrible but so good. lol
im addicted now.
i need to read more.
got to go!
lol
on to read more
~mandy

Posted: May 22, 2008

Chapter 6

Hmmm She already seems to have accepted her role as the slave by wondering why "her Master" would allow someone else touch. Already she has a sense of ownership with the Master. Perhaps a little to fast paced? You could, however, easily go back through the chapters and add a little substance in a few areas though. Overall well written so far.

Keep Writing

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Wow...addicting.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :)



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