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Revenge: The Emery Ports Project

Novel By: xxNotsosurexx
Young Adult


Emery and Lacey have been best friends for years. That is, until Lacey develops Multiple Personality Disorder. Everything goes downhill from there, and the story twists into a tale of horror, heartbreak, and revenge. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 30, 2008    Reads: 101    Comments: 15    Likes: 2   


Ever since I was young, she had been my best friend. My sidekick, my amigo, my partner in crime.

All of that changed once we were both 10.

I remembered that day as if had been branded into my skull. The start of all this trouble.
We were playing with Barbie dolls and watching cartoons, typical things we did together. We sat, laughing and giggling, just as normal.

Her mother came into the room then and started yelling at her about something that was probably not her fault. Her mom was a drug addict, and was always blaming Lacey for everything, always yelling at her. I tried to ignore it. Her mother shouted something once more, and then slapped her hard across the face. Lacey fell to her knees, tears pouring from her eyes. I crouched by her side to try and comfort her.

Her mother stormed out of the room-probably to go shoot up in their bathroom-and then Lacey turned to me, with a look of hatred in her eyes.

She had finally snapped.

She stood up, and was screaming profanities at me. She threw the Barbies’ at me, and they hit me, leaving bruises behind. Terrified, I plopped down on the floor, and began to cry. This was not like her at all. She stormed over to me, and continuously shoved me onto my side, challenging me to fight back. She pulled my hair and spat at me. She kicked and screamed, and clawed. My blood stained the carpet and my clothes. I had to get her to stop. I tried to calm her from my spot on the floor.

“Lacey!” I screeched between one of her attacks. “Please, stop! Stop…this isn’t like you! Please Lacey!” I was so confused as to why she was acting this way. She had always been kind, gentle, and soft spoken. She’d never hurt a fly, much less her best friend.

She slowed up and glared at me for a moment before she spoke. “Who?”

“You, Lacey! Please, stop hitting me!” I cried. I couldn’t take the abuse anymore!

“Who?” She repeated.

“For god sakes, you know your name!” As if it wasn’t enough for her to be flipping out, now she acted as though she was suffering from amnesia.

“I am not Lacey. I do not know who she is.” She was whispering, her eyes far away.

“What are you saying? You were born as Lacey Birmingham!” What in the hell was going on?

“No I was not!” She roared. “That is not my name!”

“Then what is, Lace?!”

“Roxy. I am Roxy Slaine.”

“What?”

“You heard me Emery.”

And in that moment, I couldn’t look at her face. I was so terrified, so confused, and so very hurt. I scrambled to my feet and tried to run to the door. My sides hurt from Lacey kicking them in, and I collapsed. She laughed at my pain, and I crawled out the door. I didn’t even give her a second thought as I attempted to run home. I limped the whole way there, and was lost in thought.

She screamed out the door to me as I ran. “ROXY SLAINE! YOU WILL REMEMBER THIS NAME, I SWEAR IT!”
I reached my house, my legs gave way at the front door.

“MOM! Please…HELP!!” I needed to tell somebody, and fast.

My mother ran to the door, and when she saw my wounds and bruises, she gasped and began to tear up.

“Oh lord…Emery Ports, tell me who did this to you right now.” She was crying, obviously worried at my current condition.

“Lacey…something’s wrong…she needs help Mom. I. Help. So angry…”

“What? Emery, what happened? LACEY did this? Is she okay?”

I grabbed her shirt and pulled her face close to mine.

“Help her.” I gasped.

She dialed 911 and was speaking frantically into the phone.

I tried to help, but I was in too much pain.

That was the last happy memory I would have with Lacey. Nothing would ever be the same again, for something serious had just taken place, and it would change both our lives as we knew it.


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Comments:

Wow great begining. Please update me when you have more :)

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! Will do

NICE! I can't wait to read the next chapter! AWESOME JOB!

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe thanks! Will be posting more soon!

cool beginingg.
update me when You put the next chapter upp

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you liked it!

I like it. =]

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

:)

Damn. Scary...
*shudders* please tell me why every one is weiting such horrible novels? It's freaking me out...

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Because people love to read about disturbing things :]
It makes good stories

batman nigga
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corinnnnnnnnn i love it!!!

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks
I'm glad you guys like it :]

Great beginning! I didn't find any mistakes at all, and it was actually pretty intense. You created good imagery and just, wow. I'm excited for the next chapter:)

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow. You make it sound much better than i actually thought it was. he next chapters may have mistakes, however. :[

Oh yeah, ha ha and very well explained:D

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

OoO intense! but gutted for Emery!

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha thanks...poor abused Emery.

That was a great start. I could feel all the emotion you put into it =] You are a talented writer!

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much :]

You told me to check it out and I did.
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*nods like an idiot*
Me Like
:)

Posted: Jul 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks so much for checking it out.
I'm glad you like it

Wow. Same name as the main character from my novel. A lot sadder, though. I look forward to reading more tomorrow. ^-^


Btw. I didn't copy for all those who think I did. -.-

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah. It gets less sad, but then it's back to sad.
Glad you liked it, and we all know you didn't copy.

"That was the last happy memory I would have with Lacey."
um...i personally wouldn't put the adjective "happy" in there because it's a rather sad memory.
other that that...um....great first chapter ^^
it's definitely interesting enough
XD
off to the next chapter :3

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha I can see where that would be a very sad memory. But it was supposed to before she flipped out. Lol Pre-crazy Lacey.
Anyway, thanks :D

wow. that was a great start. im going on to the next chapter right away =)

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thanks.
Apparently, the beginning is the best part. I hope it doesn't get suck-ish the further i go.

Wow Awesome begining, I LOVE IT!!!!

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks.
I hope you like the rest :)



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