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Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 Reads: 24 Comments: 3 Likes: 0
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Such a deep, and meaningful poem. Really touched me. I really liked it. Great job. =D
Posted: Jul 16, 2008
i especialy like the dreams drifting away as you get close to them, like mirages. ther're elusive, ever being chased and never being caught. well done
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
I think a lot of people could relate to this. The world is a big and frightening place and we're all just trying to find our place. Sometimes you may even feel like a puppet on strings being controlled by someone other than you..
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
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