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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 2 Likes: 0
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Very sweet poem. Hoping for salvation is a hard thing. Very, very good poem. ^^
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
This is a thinker; made me speechless.
You seem to be at a questioning point in your life.
--Tally
Posted: Jul 15, 2008
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