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I Can't Stop

Poem By: ashen
Young Adult


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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 54    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


I can’t stop going down this dark and lonely road,
 
I can’t stop from shutting everyone out.
 
I need someone to save me.
 
I can’t say how I really feel about you,
 
And I can’t stop from being a coward.
 
I love you,
 
And I need you to save me.
 
Save me before I go too far,
 
Save me before I become nothing.
 
I’m can’t stop from blending into the crowd and becoming nothing.
 
I can’t stop this nightmare,
 
And I need a savior.
 
I can’t stop from building this wall around myself,
 
To keep out everyone,
 
And the hurt.
 
Do you care enough to break through?
 
Do you care enough o save me?
 
The pain is getting worse,
 
And I can’t stop it.
 
Do you see it?
 
Will you help me stop it?
 
I can’t do it alone.
 
I can’t stop from becoming a monster,
 
My demons are taking over.
 
I can’t stop from becoming something I hate,
 
I can’t stop,
 
Unless I have you.
 
I’ll try not to be a burden,
 
But I can’t stop from holding on tight,
 
Because everyone that said they’d be there,
 
Left for good.
 
They never looked back,
 
And I couldn’t stop them from going.
 
I can’t stop from loving you,
 
And I wouldn’t,
 
Even if you hurt me.
 
I would still love you with the pieces of my shattered heart.
 
But would you do that to me?
 
I can’t help but wonder.
 
I can’t help but want to be in your protective arms.
 
I can’t help but want to see your loving gaze.
 
I can’t stop, ever.


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Comments:

Very sweet poem. Hoping for salvation is a hard thing. Very, very good poem. ^^

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much. :D I'm glad you liked it ^^

This is a thinker; made me speechless.
You seem to be at a questioning point in your life.

--Tally

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! :D



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