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I'll Be There For You

Poem By: ashen
Young Adult


Ill be there for you, I promise. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 8, 2008    Reads: 110    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


When you need someone,
 
I’ll be there for you.
 
When you can’t find your way out of the darkness,
 
Take my hand and I will guide you.
 
Don’t cry, I’ll comfort you.
 
When you’re hurting,
 
I’ll cheer you up.
 
Please don’t doubt me,
 
Because I’ll be by your side through it all.
 
We both need someone to love,
 
Someone that will care.
 
I won’t leave you,
 
I’ll be there.
 
Trust me,
 
I won’t be like the others.
 
I’ll be true to the end.
 
I won’t forsake you,
 
I really do care.
 
Just when I thought someone had really loved me,
 
They left me for someone else.
 
They never cared,
 
They only used me.
 
I will never be like them,
 
I will pick you up when you fall.
 
I’ll be there through the pain,
 
And rejoice with you in the rain.
 
I love you,
 
And I’ll be there for you, I promise.
 


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Somewhat short, but very sweet and filled with hope. Grea job, Danielle! ^^

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it was a little shorter than I wanted it to be, but I was tired. =/ But thanks! =D

Haha when I read the title in my e-mail it reminded me of "Friends," of course. (: ..Which I barely even watch but anywho..
This is how I am to all of my friends. And strangers, regardless of what they've done because everyone deserves love.
I love promises so in my opinion, you couldn't have ended this poem in a better way. Kudos.

--Tally

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? Haha. Thanks. :D I'm really glad you liked it. =]

Aww full of emotions.And its so touchy.
Such a nice poem.
And yea...Worlds a better place when you have someone there by your side.Someone who will always be there for you,and someone who will never ever let you down.
:)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it's much better like that. ^w^ I'm really glad you liked it. =]

soo sweet =] the person who you are there for is vey lucky to have you=]
"And rejoice with you in the rain."
that's my favourite line ^^
great work =]

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much. :] Glad you liked it. :)



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