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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008 Reads: 56 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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Yet another great poem. One of my favorites so far for sure. =D
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Amazing symbolic words from the start.
This describes (for me) being in love with a mysterious person, and you just want to know everything about them, but they have their guard up. I used to be on the other end, and my beau was trying to get my guard down.
Beautiful words.
--Tally
Posted: Jul 15, 2008
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