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The Price Paid

Poem By: ashen
Young Adult


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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 57    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


The price was paid when I took off my mask.

I thought I could trust them,

But I told them too much,

And I paid the price.

The price was high,

And it was hard to pay,

But I did,

Whether it was in blood or pain.

The price was paid,

When I thought I could trust,

When I thought they finally cared.

I just wanted love,

And a friend who would be there,

But I paid the price when no one listened,

And no one heard my plea.

I knew from the beginning that dreams were just illusions,

But I tried to go against what everyone said,

And ignored their advice,

And paid the price.

When I thought someone cared,

And shared my problems,

They mocked me.

When my tears fell,

They did nothing but point and laugh.

They lie to me,

And I believe the deceit.

I paid the price for thinking I needed someone,

Because they only let me down.

And when I fall,

They leave me for dead.

I wanted to be loved,

But I paid the price.

Everyone only cares about themselves,

And I paid the price for thinking they would just ignore their selfish ways for me.

When I pay the price,

I don’t seem learn.

I can’t stop from needing a friend.

I can't stop from wanting to be loved,

If they can.

I keep paying the price,

For thinking I could trust again.


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Comments:

Wow, I know how this feels. Wonderful poem. Keep writing. =]

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I will! :D

Of course you can't help it, you're only human.
But remember, when you're open and vulnerable, you experience so much more.
Great job putting so much feeling in this one.

--Tally

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Hmm..I'll keep that in mind. Thanks :D

Ohhh,this is very touchy and sad.Im sorry.
Yea,thats why I never tell my secrets or smtn to ppl in real life.To my "friends"...
Well,really nice poem.
:)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much :]



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