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Through the Mask

Poem By: ashen
Young Adult


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Submitted: Aug 15, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


I can see through your mask,
 
Things you tried so hard to hide,
 
Things you never wanted people to know.
 
You wanted to push your demons into your dark core,
 
You were afraid of facing them yourself.
 
But you don’t have to be alone.
 
I see to your core,
 
I can light up the way,
 
And we can fight your demons together,
 
Fight until we know they are gone.
 
Your mask has been there so long,
 
It has become a part of you.
 
You are afraid of becoming vulnerable again,
 
Afraid to show your feelings to others,
 
Because they might not feel the same.
 
It has been the wall that kept out the hurt,
 
Becoming thicker and harder to remove.
 
I cannot remove it,
 
It takes courage and only you to do it.
 
Take my hand,
 
And I can show you the life you have been missing.
 
When you block out the world,
 
You are turning away from pain,
 
And from joy.
 
Don’t make the same mistake I did.
 
I thought all the world was corrupt,
 
Thought that everyone was against me.
 
But there are others who will stand with me,
 
And fight for what we believe.
 
The mask is just a lie.
 
It wants you to believe it can protect you and keep you safe.
 
But you are shutting out the ones you love and care about,
 
Destroying all trust in people who truly want the best for you.
 
I can see through this mask,
 
And all it is doing is hurting you.


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Wow, Danielle, another beautiful poem. I had such a deep emotional conection with this one. It so touching, and whoever this poem is about is lucky to have a friend like you, to care so much about them. Keep writing!

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, Carly. =] I will ^^

I know some people like this and I worry for them because it's such a tormenting confusing phase in life..
I'm glad and proud of you that you can write a piece as mature, wise, and knowing as this one. Great job.

--Tally

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it hurts sometimes because you don't know if you are seeing the real them or not, and like you said, you worry about them. I just hope that everything turns out alright for them in the end. I'm glad you liked it. :]

Its so sad.And bit dark.I like it.
Its really great.
And ppl are sometimes afraid to show they real feelings,coz they have probably been hurted by someone.And dont they dont wanna do the same mistake again.Altough they have someone by they're side.
Wonderful poem.
:)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, glad you got my point. :] Thanks so much. :D



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