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Submitted: Aug 15, 2008 Reads: 51 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
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Wow, Danielle, another beautiful poem. I had such a deep emotional conection with this one. It so touching, and whoever this poem is about is lucky to have a friend like you, to care so much about them. Keep writing!
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
I know some people like this and I worry for them because it's such a tormenting confusing phase in life..
I'm glad and proud of you that you can write a piece as mature, wise, and knowing as this one. Great job.
--Tally
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
Its so sad.And bit dark.I like it.
Its really great.
And ppl are sometimes afraid to show they real feelings,coz they have probably been hurted by someone.And dont they dont wanna do the same mistake again.Altough they have someone by they're side.
Wonderful poem.
:)
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
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