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Poem By: ashen
Young Adult


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Submitted: Aug 1, 2008    Reads: 70    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


When will something go right for once?

When will I be able to tell you how I feel?

When will you realize I’m here beside you,

Waiting for you to notice me?

I have been waiting for so many things,

And the time had never come.

I was wishing,

Even when everything was gone.

When will I be able to be myself?

Will my friends love me for myself,

Or will they turn away?

When will someone love me for me,

Inside and out?

There are so many questions,

Not enough answers.

So lost in this world,

Sitting in the darkness.

Without knowing who I should believe,

And who I should trust.

When will I break free of myself?

When will I be able to do something right?

When will I be able to speak up to defend myself and the ones I care about?

Will the memories ever stop stinging?

When will I feel like I am not missing something?

When will this guilt go away?

I'm tired of being so weak,

Will I ever be strong enough to face the truth?

Will I ever be saved?

When…?


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Comments:

Wow, Danielle, very good poem. I know how it feel, too. But I heard this one saying, "Don't wait for the perfect moment--make the moment perfect." I just thought that was a nice quote. Keep writing. ^^

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Carly :D I'll keep that in mind. =]

hi! ashen. this is the question of identity - when. look into ur soul and come undone. i'm sure there'll be a sequel to this poem. keep writing. lol. ;-)

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha. I'll try my best ^^ Thanks so much. =]

when is now , you are too special for it not to be ,

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Those are very nice lines for a poem. :] Thanks for the comment. :)

So true. I'm glad I overcame this phase in life.
Hope you will soon!

--Tally

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. =)

Wow,so deep.And touchy.GREEEAT!!
Im sorry for all that in the poem.
.Hope you will be alright.
:)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I hope everything turns out alright too. :]



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