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A poem about love leading to death. And death leading to love. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 6, 2008 Reads: 59 Comments: 3 Likes: 3
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Ooo. wow. this is really good. and i really like it. heck, I LOVE it! the rhyming and rhythm is really good. your word choice is wonderful...wow. awesome!
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
for some weird and unknown reason this reminded me of phantom of the opera o.O lol don't ask why! hahaha! anywho :) i thought this was a lovely poem! your rhyme scheme was very nice! and those last lines - whew - very breathtaking!
looking forward to more! ^^
keep up the beautiful writing!
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
LOL I totally agree with Alice Oiseau about the Phantom of the Opera. It did kind of make me think of that! But I really loved this poem, another spectacular piece of work. Emotion was fabulous! You are very amazing:) Can't wait to read more of your stuff! :D
Posted: Aug 7, 2008
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