A girl fights her demons, and realizes there is only one way to destroy them, however this method means destroying herself. View table of contents...

Submitted: Sep 1, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

The monsters, the demons,
Pulled at her clinging soul
Not listening to reason
It's heart was black as coal

She fought the heartless beasts

But she could never win

Upon her soul it feasts

Such a tragic sin
 
She left behind a note
And she was soon crying
At the things that she wrote
About her plans for dying

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SnowQueen

Wow. Intense. Well written. Amazing.

10/10

-SnowQueen

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Kinda wrote this during my emo phase. Thank goodness I'm over that now. :)

ArmouredPapaya

Love the imagery, it made my heart sink into a pit of cold icy water. I love this kind of thing, the ones that give me chills. :)

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Ooh, "it made my heart sink into a pit of cold icy water". Love this... Can I use it in once of my poems? Please? :P

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