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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


       Where is my pride?

                  Is it under my bed

           In my closet

                        Where is my pride?

             I don't know that's why I'm asking

                          No but now I found it it's in my heart

                                          I was told it was inside me but its my pride and it's not going to hide


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Comments:

Short and choppy. I love it. The simplicity betrays the emotion left far beneath this poem. Excellent work.

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx lots

wow i like this one 2 it's straight to the point and small. i like that you used simple words but the meanings were big

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx lots i know alot of ppl seem to like how it's small but it still has a strong meaning i like to play with my poems

Short and precise. Love it! I actually prefer short poems, they seem to feel more emotion attached to them =)
~Maple

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx alot



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