Where is my pride?
Is it under my bed
In my closet
Where is my pride?
I don't know that's why I'm asking
No but now I found it it's in my heart
I was told it was inside me but its my pride and it's not going to hide
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my pride
Poem By: dannyrules
Young Adult
a girl who finds her pride View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 25, 2008 Reads: 42 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
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Short and choppy. I love it. The simplicity betrays the emotion left far beneath this poem. Excellent work.
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
wow i like this one 2 it's straight to the point and small. i like that you used simple words but the meanings were big
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
Short and precise. Love it! I actually prefer short poems, they seem to feel more emotion attached to them =)
~Maple
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
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